I will review your landing page to identify conversion issues and opportunities
About this Gig
A landing page can get good traffic and still lose most visitors in the first few seconds. This review shows where your page loses attention, trust or momentum, and what to change first.
I go through your page as a new visitor would, on desktop and mobile, and compare it with the ad, email or link that sends people there.
What I review:
- Headline and offer clarity
- Message match with your traffic source
- Visual hierarchy and page structure
- CTA placement and consistency
- Trust elements and proof
- Forms and the steps to convert
- Mobile usability
- Distractions, friction and basic technical issues
What you receive:
A written review with annotated screenshots and recommendations ranked by priority, so you or your team can act on them.
Good for lead generation pages, sales pages, opt-in pages and booking pages on most builders, including Shopify, WordPress and Elementor.
This is a review, not a copywriting or design service. I explain what is unclear and why, with direction on how to improve it, but I do not rewrite or rebuild the page.
Purpose:
Sales Conversion
Website type:
Landing Pages
Industry /Niche:
Other
FAQ
Will you rewrite my copy or redesign the page?
No. This is a conversion review. I point out what is unclear or getting in the way and explain how to improve it. Rewriting copy and rebuilding the page are not included.
What kinds of pages do you review?
Lead generation pages, sales pages, opt-in pages, booking pages and product launch pages. Any builder works as long as I can view the page in a browser.
How is this different from your Shopify store audit?
This gig focuses on one landing page and the path through it. My Shopify Store Conversion Audit covers a whole store: homepage, navigation, collections, product pages and cart.
Can you review a page that is not live yet?
Yes. Share a preview link, or a full page screenshot or PDF export. Forms, speed and mobile behavior cannot be tested from a static image, so those findings will be limited.
Do you guarantee higher conversions?
No. I identify what is likely holding the page back and rank what to address first. Results depend on your traffic, offer and how the changes are applied.
What counts as a revision?
A revision means clarifying or expanding on a point already in the review. Reviewing a different page or a redesigned version is new scope and needs a separate order.

