I will be your professional childrens book and middle grade beta reader

Thailand

I speak English, Spanish, French

Honest, detailed, trusted, feedback, romance, fantasy, YA

Hi, I’m Brady, a beta reader for authors who want honest, helpful feedback on their manuscripts. I review plot, characters, pacing, trope execution, and overall reader experience. You’ll get clear not...
About this Gig

Will a child actually keep turning the page?


Writing for young readers is the hardest job in the world. If the voice is too old, they're bored. If the pacing is too slow, they're gone. I'm here to make sure your story doesn't just sit on a shelf but becomes a favorite.


I provide professional beta reading for Children's Picture Books and Middle Grade (MG) novels. I help you bridge the gap between "good idea" and "page-turner."


Why authors work with me:

  • The Voice Check: I'll tell you if your 10-year-old protagonist actually sounds like a 10-year-old.
  • The "Boredom" Radar: I flag exactly where a young reader might close the book.
  • Tension & Humor: I analyze if your jokes land and your heart-tugging moments hit.
  • Market Readiness: Is the vocabulary right for the age group? I'll let you know.


What you get back:

A Deep-Dive Reader Report: No fluff. Just actionable feedback on plot, characters, and age-appropriateness.


Stop guessing and start polishing. Lets turn your manuscript into a story that kids will want to read over and over again.


Contact Me" for a custom quote or select a package to get started today!

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Children’s books

Humor/ entertainment

Language:

English

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