I will beta read your romance or dark romance manuscript

Thailand

I speak English, Spanish, French

Honest, detailed, trusted, feedback, romance, fantasy, YA

Hi, I’m Brady, a beta reader for authors who want honest, helpful feedback on their manuscripts. I review plot, characters, pacing, trope execution, and overall reader experience. You’ll get clear not...
About this Gig

Is your romance manuscript ready for readers, or is the "spark" missing?


I provide high-level beta reading specifically for authors who want to master their genre. I don't just tell you if I "liked" the book; I analyze the mechanics of your story to ensure its market-ready.


My Analysis Focuses On:

  • Trope Execution: Are your "Enemies to Lovers" beats hitting correctly?
  • Chemistry & Tension: I'll flag exactly where the romantic heat rises or stalls.
  • Pacing & Flow: I identify "sagging middles" and plot holes that pull readers out.
  • Reader Perspective: Honest, live reactions via detailed inline comments.


What You Receive:

You'll get a comprehensive Reader Report and a manuscript marked with my "live" thoughts. I focus on actionable feedback telling you exactly what to fix and why.


I specialize in Romance, Fantasy, and Thrillers. I understand the tropes readers crave and the mistakes that lead to 1-star reviews.


Lets make your manuscript unforgettable. Select a package or message me for a custom quote!

Genre:

Fanfiction

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Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

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Romance

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Science fiction

Language:

English

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