I will developmental edit your fantasy or romantasy novel
Certified editor for fantasy and romantasy novels
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About this Gig
Hi! I'm Bridget, a certified developmental editor (and fantasy writer) with 4 years of experience. If your draft feels almost there, but you want a stronger plot structure, clearer pacing, and more compelling character arcs, I would love to help you strengthen your story while keeping your voice completely yours.
You'll receive:
- Big-picture feedback on plot, structure, pacing, and stakes
- Notes on character arcs, motivation, and relationships
- Scene-level guidance on what's working and what needs more clarity
- Suggestions to strengthen tension, consistency, and emotional payoff
- Comments in your document, plus a clear roadmap for revision
I specialize in fantasy, romantasy, paranormal, urban fantasy, YA, dystopian, and horror (I'm happy to work with other genres too!).
* I'm comfortable working with adult content, including dark themes, violence, and explicit romance. *
Not sure what you need? Send me your blurb, word count, and what you're hoping to achieve, and I'll happily point you to the best fit!
Want to be extra sure were a good match? Message me for a sample developmental edit on your opening chapters.
** Now booking for July!! **
Thanks and happy writing!
Bridget
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FAQ
What does a developmental edit include?
A developmental edit focuses on the big-picture elements of your story—plot, pacing, character arcs, worldbuilding, tension, and overall structure. You’ll receive an editorial report plus comments throughout your manuscript!
Do you fix grammar or rewrite sentences?
No, developmental editing is about story structure, not grammar. If you’d like stylistic/line editing, copy editing, or proofreading, I offer those in separate gigs and would be happy to help!
What genres do you work with?
I specialize in fantasy, romantasy, urban fantasy, paranormal, YA, and horror, but I’m happy to work with other genres too. Feel free to message me if you have any questions!
How long is the editorial report?
It varies by project, but my reports are always detailed, clear, and tailored to your story’s needs!
Can I send you my full manuscript before ordering?
Of course! Please message me so I can look at your word count, needs, and make sure you choose the perfect package for you. I can also create a custom package tailored to your specific needs!
How do I choose the right package?
Send me a message with your word count and a quick summary of your project. I’ll help you pick the best package, or I can create a custom package for you!
If I’ve written a series, can you edit the entire thing?
Absolutely! I’d love to work with you across multiple books. If you let me know ahead of time that your project is part of a series, I can create a custom order with a discount. Just send me a message so we can plan the best approach for your series!
Do you offer follow-up questions after delivery?
Of course! If you have any questions at all about anything I've commented on or suggested, please feel free to ask me.
Are you comfortable with mature, dark, or violent content?
Yes, I’m comfortable with mature, dark, violent, and romantic themes.
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Got very useful feedback, will work with her again.
$200-$400
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7 days
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Helpful?S samanthalouise3

United Kingdom
I could not of done this without Bridget, so invested in my story, truly understood each and every character, and made me feel at ease the whole process. Without her encouragement and expertise I would not have a book I love and am proud of about to make its way out into the world, thank you so much!
$600-$800
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6 weeks
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serfninja

Chile
Got very useful feedback, will work with her again.
$200-$400
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7 days
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Helpful?S samanthalouise3

United Kingdom
I could not of done this without Bridget, so invested in my story, truly understood each and every character, and made me feel at ease the whole process. Without her encouragement and expertise I would not have a book I love and am proud of about to make its way out into the world, thank you so much!
$600-$800
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6 weeks
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