I will beta read and critique your novel with indepth feedback
Spanish translation, Book formating and Book writing expert
About this Gig
Are you looking for a beta reader who can provide honest, detailed, and constructive feedback on your fiction manuscript? Do you feel unsure about your story structure, pacing, characters, or whether your story truly connects with readers?
Thats where I come in.
I am Brithene Pk, a passionate fiction beta reader dedicated to helping authors strengthen their stories. Ill read your manuscript from a genuine readers perspective and provide actionable feedback to help you identify what works, what may need improvement, and where your story can become more engaging.
WHAT I OFFER
- Feedback on plot, pacing, character development, and dialogue
- Honest reader reactions and emotional impact
- Insights on story flow, consistency, and engagement
- Actionable suggestions to improve your manuscript
- A feedback report highlighting strengths and areas for improvement
GENRES I LOVE TO READ
- Fantasy
- Romance
- Science Fiction
- Horror & Thriller
- Mystery & Cozy Mystery
- Dystopian
- Contemporary Fiction
Lets make your story stronger and more engaging for your readers!
Language:
English
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German
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What's the difference between a beta read and an editorial critique?
A beta read focuses on the reader's experience how your story feels, flows, and holds attention. I provide honest reactions, identify confusing parts, and highlight what works and what doesn't. An editorial critique is more technical and involves line-by-line editing, which I don't offer.
What genres do you accept?
I specialize in Fantasy, Romance, Mystery/Thriller, Young Adult, Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, and Contemporary Fiction. If your genre isn't listed, feel free to message me I'm open to discussing it!
Do you accept non-fiction, memoirs, or children's books?
No. I work exclusively with fiction manuscripts. For non-fiction, memoirs, or children's literature, I recommend finding a beta reader who specializes in those areas.
What do I receive when you finish reading?
You'll receive two things: (1) inline comments throughout your manuscript with my immediate thoughts and reactions, and (2) a separate reader report summarizing big-picture feedback on plot, pacing, character development, tone, and overall readability.
How do you deliver the feedback?
I work with Google Docs and Microsoft Word. You'll receive your manuscript back with inline comments, plus a separate document containing your reader report. All feedback is delivered directly through the Fiverr order page.

