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I will your first 3 chapters
About this Gig
The first three chapters are where most manuscripts win or lose an agent, a reader, or a KU click-through. I'll evaluate your opening arc for structural pacing, world-building clarity, and whether your hook actually holds.
What you get:
- Inline comments across all 3 chapters
- A structured reader report covering pacing, info-dump risk, character chemistry/tension, world-building clarity, and hook strength
- Honest reader-first reactions, not just proofreading
Best for: Epic Fantasy, Romantasy, and Romance. Especially useful before querying or before a KU launch.
I'm a fiction writer with completed manuscripts across multiple genres and pen names genre.
New to Fiverr, established fiction writer. Message me with any questions before ordering!
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you critique?
Primarily Fantasy, Romantasy, and Romance. If your manuscript is a different genre, message me first to check fit.
What format should I send my manuscript in?
Word document
Do you edit grammar and line-level issues?
This gig focuses on story-level feedback, pacing, hook strength, and world-building, not line editing or proofreading. If you need that, please message me to discuss.
What if my first 3 chapters are longer than 15,000 words?
If your chapters run significantly longer, message me first. I may recommend my 30,000-word gig instead for a fairer scope match.
How many revisions are included?
1 revision is included in Basic and Standard. Additional revisions are available as a paid extra.
