I will be your fiction beta reader

Vetted Pro

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

306 orders completed

Teller of Tales

Note: I am currently focusing on the needs of long-term clients, and heavily limiting the number of new clients I accept. I'm an editor and bestselling fiction author, eager to make your next writi...
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  • Beta Reading

  • Book & eBook Writing

  • Book Editing

  • Creative Writing

  • Proofreading & Editing

  • Writing Advice

About this Gig

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Getting ready to click the publish button on your new book? Not so fast.


Before you send your book out into one of the most competitive markets, consider getting a final critique.


I'm a self-published and traditionally published author, including a bestselling middle-grade detective series and young adult romance series. I'm also a voracious reader. Stories are my passion.


Let me put that passion to work for you by reviewing your story, plot, pacing, character development, world-building, consistency, and more!


I will read your book and deliver straightforward and actionable feedback you can use to improve the final version of your book. I focus on giving useful advice over artificially lengthy and wordy reports, so don't expect 20 pages of ChatGPT platitudes and cliches.


Publish with confidence!


Confidentiality Statement:

I will never share the contents of your work without your express

permission.


  • You must message me before ordering.

Genre:

Adventure

Horror/ thriller

Mystery

Romance

Science fiction

Language:

English

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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Clients I’ve worked with
Twisted Key Publishing

Twisted Key Publishing

Books Publishing

I have written young adult science fiction novels for Twisted Key Publishing and have a wonderful, ongoing relationship with them.

Jul 2020

My Portfolio

Reviews

15 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.7
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    lawnfighter

    US

    United States

    5

    He responded when I was half panicked and elated at finishing my first-ever draft. His feedback helped immensely, and his ability to see the shape of what I was trying to do and help me create it is invaluable.

    $200-$400

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    brianmyers126

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Mr. Brogath reviewed my 99,000 word sci fi thriller and provided two pages of narrative feedback. While brief, the feedback was very constructive and actionable. He has a good understanding for what makes a story work.

    $400-$600

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

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    No
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    vel_tyw

    Repeat Client

    TW

    Taiwan

    5

    It was a pleasure working with you. Many thanks.

    $400-$600

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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    vel_tyw

    Repeat Client

    TW

    Taiwan

    5

    The communication is considerate, kind and thoughtful.

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    No
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    emmal0904

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    He delivered earlier than expected and his feedback was honest and constructive. the advice has helped me enormously and I can't thank him enough. I will be working with him in the future.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

15 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(15)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.7
Sort By
Most relevant
  • L

    lawnfighter

    US

    United States

    5

    He responded when I was half panicked and elated at finishing my first-ever draft. His feedback helped immensely, and his ability to see the shape of what I was trying to do and help me create it is invaluable.

    $200-$400

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B
    image-docs

    brianmyers126

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Mr. Brogath reviewed my 99,000 word sci fi thriller and provided two pages of narrative feedback. While brief, the feedback was very constructive and actionable. He has a good understanding for what makes a story work.

    $400-$600

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • V
    image-docs

    vel_tyw

    Repeat Client

    TW

    Taiwan

    5

    It was a pleasure working with you. Many thanks.

    $400-$600

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • V
    image-docs

    vel_tyw

    Repeat Client

    TW

    Taiwan

    5

    The communication is considerate, kind and thoughtful.

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    emmal0904

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    He delivered earlier than expected and his feedback was honest and constructive. the advice has helped me enormously and I can't thank him enough. I will be working with him in the future.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No