I will be your fiction developmental editor

Vetted Pro

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

306 orders completed

Teller of Tales

Note: I am currently focusing on the needs of long-term clients, and heavily limiting the number of new clients I accept. I'm an editor and bestselling fiction author, eager to make your next writi...
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  • Beta Reading

  • Book & eBook Writing

  • Book Editing

  • Creative Writing

  • Proofreading & Editing

  • Writing Advice

About this Gig

Vetted Pro

  • You must message me before ordering. I am currently focusing on the needs of long-term clients and limiting the number of new clients I accept.


I'm an author with many books, including some bestsellers! As your developmental editor, I will be looking for some of the following:


Pacing: Does your story throw your protagonist into conflict quickly enough? Too quickly, or without enough explanation?


Characters: Are your characters interesting enough? Are they believable? 


Tension: Is there enough excitement and motivation present to keep the reader engaged, without feeling overwhelmed or confused?


Story: Does the overall story make sense? Does it fit your target audience?


Execution: Does the opening chapter sell the book? Does the fight scene make the reader squeeze the book in anticipation? Will the supporting character's death scene bring the reader to tears?


Consistency: Did you state your protagonist was a vegan in chapter one, only to have him bite into a juicy steak with his crew in chapter eight with no explanation?


Have a look at the sample edit above!


Confidentiality Statement:

I will never share the contents of your work without your express permission.

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Fanfiction

Horror/ thriller

Mystery

Romance

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Clients I’ve worked with
Twisted Key Publishing

Twisted Key Publishing

Books Publishing

I have written young adult science fiction novels for Twisted Key Publishing and have a wonderful, ongoing relationship with them.

Jul 2020

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Reviews

47 reviews for this Gig
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    liaupton4

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    United States

    5

    I gut very good feedback to know where to go with my manuscript. Much appreciated.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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  • J

    jayden_green

    US

    United States

    5

    GREAT EXPERIENCE! He responded quickly to my messages and gave me great advice for my story and just writing in general. My order was also delivered before the due date. I highly recommend Mr. Brogath to anyone needing a top-notch editor for creative writing projects. 👍

    $600-$800

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

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    millmenut

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Always great working with this editor. Makes me think of things I wouldn't have considered and is always honest with his feedback. Come back every book in the series as I know I can trust him. Would recommend to anyone writing their own story!

    $400-$600

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    millmenut

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Always a pleasure working with Mr Brogath. Such useful feedback but lots of positive points to help with motivation.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    millmenut

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Very thorough feedback and extremely useful as a first-time author.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

47 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(46)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(1)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • L

    liaupton4

    US

    United States

    5

    I gut very good feedback to know where to go with my manuscript. Much appreciated.

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jayden_green

    US

    United States

    5

    GREAT EXPERIENCE! He responded quickly to my messages and gave me great advice for my story and just writing in general. My order was also delivered before the due date. I highly recommend Mr. Brogath to anyone needing a top-notch editor for creative writing projects. 👍

    $600-$800

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    millmenut

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Always great working with this editor. Makes me think of things I wouldn't have considered and is always honest with his feedback. Come back every book in the series as I know I can trust him. Would recommend to anyone writing their own story!

    $400-$600

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    millmenut

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Always a pleasure working with Mr Brogath. Such useful feedback but lots of positive points to help with motivation.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    millmenut

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Very thorough feedback and extremely useful as a first-time author.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No