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I will professionally edit your childrens book manuscript
Children's Book Editor and Designer
With 24 years in publishing, my focus is children's books, cookbooks, self-help books, and journals — from first draft to print-ready publication.
I've worked with major publishing houses and internat...
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Bryony was selected by the Fiverr Pro team for their expertise.
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What people loved about this freelancer
mtmonster
United States
The Million Tooth Monster was my first children's book. My ignorance of what an editor did kept me from getting one until very late in the process. An editor...
drewparkinson
United States
Bryony is fantastic to work with. She is very responsive and attentive to detail. She has already edited one book for me that has since been traditionally published,...
carlogiacco
Australia
This is the second time I've worked with Bryony, and it's been wonderful again. This time, she really helped me understand the structural and motivational issues...
About this Gig
Vetted Pro
Writing a great children's book is harder than it looks, but you don't have to figure it out alone.
With 24 years in publishing, including work with major publishers and award-winning titles, I provide professional, Fiverr Pro-vetted editing that strengthens your story at every level. I work with both fully written and AI-assisted manuscripts, shaping them into engaging, publication-ready books. Every edit is tailored to your story, your voice, and your target age group.
My process:
- Edit 1 - Structural edit: Plot, pacing, structure, and tone, with tracked changes and clear notes
- Edit 2 - Line edit: Flow, rhythm, word choice, and readability refined
- Edit 3 - Proofread: Final polish for grammar, punctuation, and consistency
Final product:
- Manuscript with tracked changes
- Clear editorial notes and feedback (if necessary)
- Improved structure, flow, and readability
- A polished, publication-ready manuscript
What I'll need from you:
- Your manuscript (Word document preferred)
- Target age range
- Any specific concerns or areas you'd like me to focus on
Let's shape your story into one that children will want to hear again and again.
Language:
English
Genre:
Children’s books
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Comic book
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Education
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Teen / young adult
POV:
Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
Do you only edit children's books?
No, I edit a variety of fiction and non-fiction manuscripts.
What type of children's books do you edit?
All and any - from picture and chapter books, right up to young adult fiction. I edit both poetry and prose books.
Will you be using AI to edit my manuscript?
No — every edit is carried out entirely by me, a professional children's book editor with 24 years of publishing experience. All feedback, suggestions, and rewrites are my own work.
What if I don't agree with your suggested changes?
All edits are delivered as tracked changes, which means you can accept or reject each suggestion individually.
How long will the editing process take?
elivery time depends on the package selected and my current workload. I always aim to deliver within the timeframe shown on the gig. If you need a faster turnaround, please message me before ordering.
Do you edit rhyming picture books?
Yes — rhyme, rhythm, and metre are areas I particularly enjoy working on. I'll flag any lines where the rhythm breaks or the rhyme feels forced, and suggest alternatives where needed.
Can you help if English isn't my first language?
Absolutely. I work with authors from all over the world and am happy to help strengthen the language, clarity, and flow of your manuscript regardless of your background.
Reviews
773 reviews for this Gig
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mtmonster
United States
The Million Tooth Monster was my first children's book. My ignorance of what an editor did kept me from getting one until very late in the process. An editor helps make you look like a professional. Bryony helped me with that. the story is now polished and ready for publishing.
$200-$400
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?D drewparkinson
Repeat Client
United States
Bryony is fantastic to work with. She is very responsive and attentive to detail. She has already edited one book for me that has since been traditionally published, and now she is editing another. Overall, it's been a great experience.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?C carlogiacco
Repeat Client
Australia
This is the second time I've worked with Bryony, and it's been wonderful again. This time, she really helped me understand the structural and motivational issues in my story that I'd missed, and applied them in a timely and professional manner. I look forward to working with her again!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?D dia2222
United States
I had hoped this would be a much better experience but sadly I was disappointed by the lack of understanding, attention details, and lack of cooperation. I had laid out specific requirements that were not being met by the seller and I personally didn't receive communication from the seller when I tried...
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?R randytetrick
United States
I hired Bryony to help edit my children’s book and went into the process hoping for a collaborative experience where I could engage along the way and make sure the story was truly ready for the next stage. It’s possible I may not have fully understood the scope of the editing service, but I found the...
$200-$400
Price
11 days
Duration
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Reviews
773 reviews for this Gig
| (757) | ||
| (10) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (3) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
M mtmonster
United States
The Million Tooth Monster was my first children's book. My ignorance of what an editor did kept me from getting one until very late in the process. An editor helps make you look like a professional. Bryony helped me with that. the story is now polished and ready for publishing.
$200-$400
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?D drewparkinson
Repeat Client
United States
Bryony is fantastic to work with. She is very responsive and attentive to detail. She has already edited one book for me that has since been traditionally published, and now she is editing another. Overall, it's been a great experience.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?C carlogiacco
Repeat Client
Australia
This is the second time I've worked with Bryony, and it's been wonderful again. This time, she really helped me understand the structural and motivational issues in my story that I'd missed, and applied them in a timely and professional manner. I look forward to working with her again!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?D dia2222
United States
I had hoped this would be a much better experience but sadly I was disappointed by the lack of understanding, attention details, and lack of cooperation. I had laid out specific requirements that were not being met by the seller and I personally didn't receive communication from the seller when I tried...
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?R randytetrick
United States
I hired Bryony to help edit my children’s book and went into the process hoping for a collaborative experience where I could engage along the way and make sure the story was truly ready for the next stage. It’s possible I may not have fully understood the scope of the editing service, but I found the...
$200-$400
Price
11 days
Duration
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