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I will edit and proofread your childrens chapter book
Children's Book Editor and Designer
With 24 years in publishing, my focus is children's books, cookbooks, self-help books, and journals — from first draft to print-ready publication.
I've worked with major publishing houses and internat...
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About this Gig
Writing a strong chapter book isn't easy. Every scene, chapter, and sentence needs to keep young readers engaged. With 24 years in publishing, including work with major publishers and award-winning titles, I provide professional editing that strengthens your story from structure to final polish.
My process:
- Edit 1 Structural & developmental: plot, pacing, chapter flow, with tracked changes
- Edit 2 Line edit: flow, rhythm, readability
- Edit 3 Proofread: grammar, punctuation, consistency
Final product:
- Tracked changes and clear editorial notes
- Improved structure, flow, and readability
- A polished, publication-ready manuscript
What I'll need:
- Your manuscript (MS Word document preferred)
- Target age range (if known)
- Any specific concerns
What I cover:
- Plot, pacing, and structure
- Character consistency
- Age-appropriate language
- Sentence flow and clarity
- Grammar, spelling, punctuation
Let's shape your story into one that young readers won't want to put down.
Language:
English
Genre:
Adventure
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Children’s books
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Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Teen / young adult
POV:
Multiple POVs
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Objective / neutral
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Active
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My Portfolio
FAQ
Do I edit books under 10,000 words
Yes, please see my picture book editing gig.
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mollie_elfin
United Kingdom
Bryony helped improve the flow of the story, strengthen the emotional rhythm, and refine the language in a thoughtful and natural way. Her guidance made the book much stronger, and I’m very grateful for her support throughout the journey.
$800-$1,000
Price
13 days
Duration
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noradelzelle
United States
Bryony was a very thoughtful editor. Her questions helped me to add details and plot point to flesh out my story. She was the type of editor I had hoped to find. Everything was questioned, which led hopefully to an improved reading experience.
Helpful?
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M mollie_elfin
United Kingdom
Bryony helped improve the flow of the story, strengthen the emotional rhythm, and refine the language in a thoughtful and natural way. Her guidance made the book much stronger, and I’m very grateful for her support throughout the journey.
$800-$1,000
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?N noradelzelle
United States
Bryony was a very thoughtful editor. Her questions helped me to add details and plot point to flesh out my story. She was the type of editor I had hoped to find. Everything was questioned, which led hopefully to an improved reading experience.
Helpful?
