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I will give honest reader feedback on your fiction chapter
About this Gig
I'll read your story or novel excerpt with care and share what I genuinely felt as a reader where it hooked me, where my eyes glazed over, where it made me pause and think, which parts I secretly wanted to steal, and what stayed with me afterward. I don't nitpick grammar or style; I pay attention to how your story makes me feel. You'll get honest, detailed notes on tone, pacing, and emotion feedback to help you see how your story lands for someone who truly loves stories.
Genre:
Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Will you fix my grammar or rewrite my story?
No — I focus on the reading experience. I’ll point out where the story feels strong or weak, but I won’t rewrite or correct grammar. My goal is to help you understand how your story lands emotionally and structurally.
What kind of stories do you read?
Anything with heart and intention — from fantasy and sci-fi to slice-of-life, romance, or experimental fiction. If it tells a story, I’ll read it with care.
Can I ask follow-up questions after you send feedback?
Yes, absolutely. I’m happy to clarify my thoughts or expand on any part of the feedback once (twice for the Premium package). I want my comments to truly help your writing process.
How detailed is your feedback?
Each package has a different depth. Even my shortest package offers genuine reactions — what pulled me in, what lost me, and what I felt while reading. Higher tiers go deeper into tone, emotion, and story flow.
What if I’m not sure which package fits my project?
Just message me! I’ll take a quick look and recommend the best fit based on your story length and what kind of feedback you’re looking for.
