I will provide detailed notes on a short or feature length script
What people loved about this freelancer
alanwillson163

United States
A lot of editors are like going to a GP Doctor and they'll give you general advice. They'll diagnose a problem or see a symptom, tell you to take to Tylenol...
mammolese2002

United Kingdom
Cameron was incredibly thoughtful and professional throughout the entire process. His feedback was detailed, insightful, and clearly came from a deep understanding...
magnuslyche1

United Kingdom
Cameron is a fantastic script reviewer. He has a deep understanding of the craft and will be able to pin point the exact places where you will need to work...
mammolese2002

United Kingdom
Cameron delivered thoughtful and detailed notes that really helped clarify key areas of the script. His feedback is clear, constructive, and easy to apply....
About this Gig
I want to help you tell the story you want to tell.
I will provide detailed notes that examine your story, characters, and plot as well as looking for any grammar, spelling, or formatting mistakes in your script. I will tell you what is working in your script, and more importantly help you fix what isn't. Additionally, I will give you a list of scripts/films that remind me of your script, this will give you real world examples you can look at to help hone in your ideas.
I also want to provide a revision option, which allows you the opportunity to ask questions based off of my notes. I have found in private script reviews I've done, helping writers get to where they are trying to go is immensely benefitted when there is a dialogue after I've completely read their script. By purchasing an additional revision, you can ask questions about your characters, plot, or anything that you want further elaboration on.
My review process will provide you with detailed notes that will make jumping back in for your next draft exciting and fun.
Language:
English
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Other Scriptwriting Services I Offer
FAQ
What is provided in your coverage?
I will provide both written pages (typically 3-6 pages depending on script length), detailing my thoughts on your script, as well as a "red pen" draft of your script.
What is provide in your Red Pen draft?
In my Red Pen draft, I will write directly on your script detailing my thoughts, questions, or general notes as I am actively reading. This can help to inform what other readers may be feeling at any current point in your script, as well as correct spelling, grammar and formatting right on the page.
Why would I want to ask questions after receiving coverage?
Some writers that I have provided coverage to have additional questions that may not have been brought up, or elaborated on, in a manor that they wanted. This could include: Character motivations, settings, plot twists, or just about anything. I want to open a dialogue with you about your script.
What is your experience?
I have been working in the film industry in Los Angeles for 8 years. Over that time I have written many feature and short length scripts as well as given coverage to many of the writers I have met. I have also studied over 1000 films for my work, and use that knowledge while reading any scripts.
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Repeat Client

United States
A lot of editors are like going to a GP Doctor and they'll give you general advice. They'll diagnose a problem or see a symptom, tell you to take to Tylenol and call me in the morning. Cameron is going to kill your project, and perform an autopsy. Your character, dialog, setting, theme, everything...
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?M mammolese2002
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
Cameron was incredibly thoughtful and professional throughout the entire process. His feedback was detailed, insightful, and clearly came from a deep understanding of story structure and character development. The notes helped me refine the script while preserving the heart of the story, and his attention...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M magnuslyche1

United Kingdom
Cameron is a fantastic script reviewer. He has a deep understanding of the craft and will be able to pin point the exact places where you will need to work on for your next draft. I'd highly recommend him to any/all script writers who are unsure where you need to go to make it the best possible version of it. Thank you again!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M mammolese2002
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
Cameron delivered thoughtful and detailed notes that really helped clarify key areas of the script. His feedback is clear, constructive, and easy to apply. Communication was great throughout, and I’m looking forward to continuing working together. Highly recommended.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S sanjeev0417

United States
Exceeded expectations!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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A alanwillson163
Repeat Client

United States
A lot of editors are like going to a GP Doctor and they'll give you general advice. They'll diagnose a problem or see a symptom, tell you to take to Tylenol and call me in the morning. Cameron is going to kill your project, and perform an autopsy. Your character, dialog, setting, theme, everything...
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?M mammolese2002
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
Cameron was incredibly thoughtful and professional throughout the entire process. His feedback was detailed, insightful, and clearly came from a deep understanding of story structure and character development. The notes helped me refine the script while preserving the heart of the story, and his attention...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M magnuslyche1

United Kingdom
Cameron is a fantastic script reviewer. He has a deep understanding of the craft and will be able to pin point the exact places where you will need to work on for your next draft. I'd highly recommend him to any/all script writers who are unsure where you need to go to make it the best possible version of it. Thank you again!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?M mammolese2002
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
Cameron delivered thoughtful and detailed notes that really helped clarify key areas of the script. His feedback is clear, constructive, and easy to apply. Communication was great throughout, and I’m looking forward to continuing working together. Highly recommended.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?S sanjeev0417

United States
Exceeded expectations!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
