I will be your beta reader, romance beta reader, with critique manuscript feedback

United States

I speak English

Professional Beta reader

I’m Carlos Hargis, a freelance creative writer and professional beta reader with over 6 years of experience working with authors across YA, New Adult, and Romance genres. I hold a Master’s degree in C...
About this Gig

Your work needs thorough and truthful feedback, and most authors do not know how to approach it, how to build the structure, or how to see the holes in the plot. Without good Beta reader or an alpha reader, publishing could result in lack of engagement among the readers and lost opportunities.

You will get extensive criticism and practical manuscript feedback that will help make your story stronger, flow better and gain a better satisfaction with the readers. Professional alpha reader knowledge and extensive Beta reading help to make your manuscript more coherent, powerful, and prepared to shine.


I Focus on:

  • Identifying plot holes and inconsistencies
  • Evaluating pacing and story flow
  • Highlighting confusing or weak sections
  • Assessing character development and engagement
  • Providing honest reader-based critique
  • Delivering clear, actionable manuscript feedback


What I Offer:

  • Honest critique on plot, pacing, and structure
  • In-depth manuscript feedback with clear suggestions
  • Reader-focused experience
  • Clarity on strengths and areas to improve sales or conversions


Get the direction your manuscript needs order now or reach out if you'd like to discuss your project first.

Genre:

Romance

Fantasy

Language:

English

French

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