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I will professionally beta read and critique your manuscript
About this Gig
Please message me before ordering to confirm details and availability.
Welcome, writer!
If youre looking for an insightful, deep, and detailed beta reader to fully experience your manuscript and help you develop it into its best version, youve come to the right place.
What my beta reading service includes:
A reader's report featuring:
- Strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript.
- Analysis of pacing and story structure.
- Coherence and realism in character arcs and motivations.
- Writing style and dialogue analysis.
- Plot logic and technical inconsistencies.
- World building and setting coherence.
- Emotional engagement and reader immersion.
- Optional: scientific or historical accuracy.
- Optional: Up to 3 specific questions you want me to explore.
Every point will be supported with referenced examples from your manuscript.
Inline comments throughout your text:
- Real-time reactions to whats happening (both logical and emotional)
- Questions, doubts, and suggestions to strengthen key scenes.
- Sentences, lines, or descriptions that are especially well-crafted.
Want to test my style first?
Check out my extra gig, which includes a sample critique of your manuscript's first 10 pages.
Language:
English
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Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What languages do you work with?
I work both in Spanish (my native language) and English.
Can you work with more than 90k words?
Yes, of course! Just send me a message and we will set a custom price for your manuscript.
Do you beta read non fiction?
It depends on the topic. Please contact me and tell me about your specific project.
Can you work with an unfinished project?
Absolutely. I believe that receiving feedback at any stage of a creative project can be an enriching experience.
Is there any genre you do not beta read?
No, I can work with any fiction genre. I am especially fond of fantasy, romance, historical fiction and contemporary fiction.
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Spain
Carmen ha mosdtrado una vez más gran profesionalidad y atención al detalle.
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dacmjo
Germany
Ha sido un placer trabajar con Carmen. Excelente profesional. Informe detallado y muy honesto, señalando puntos de mejora clave que yo no veía. Sus reacciones en vivo son una mina de información. Si buscas una opinión profesional y sincera para tu manuscrito, Carmen es la indicada.
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
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Helpful?P pdebenito
Repeat Client
Spain
Carmen realizó un informe detallado de lectura que, sinceramente, me sorprendió en su nivel de detalle y apreciación de temáticas, a veces muy sutiles, presentes en la obra. Fue crítica con el trabajo manteniendo en todo momento la cordialidad y haciendo gala de un enfoque objetivo y mucha atención al detalle.
$50-$100
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10 days
Duration
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Helpful?A anafhc
Spain
I am a graphic artist working on my first comic. My drawing skills are stronger than my writing skills and I needed some perspective and advice on the script for my comic. Carmen understood the task right away and was able to adapt her comments to the specific format I was working with. She gave me...
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
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Helpful?G guillermomr13
Spain
Professional, honest, swift and meticulous. Carmen D provides a great service as a beta reader from start to finish, and provides a manuscript report that manages to be polite, insightful and truthful at the same time. She perfectly understands the assignment and delivers beyond expectations, all for...
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
C Seller's Response
Helpful?
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7 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Value of delivery
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P pdebenito
Repeat Client
Spain
Carmen ha mosdtrado una vez más gran profesionalidad y atención al detalle.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
C Seller's Response
Helpful?D dacmjo
Germany
Ha sido un placer trabajar con Carmen. Excelente profesional. Informe detallado y muy honesto, señalando puntos de mejora clave que yo no veía. Sus reacciones en vivo son una mina de información. Si buscas una opinión profesional y sincera para tu manuscrito, Carmen es la indicada.
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
C Seller's Response
Helpful?P pdebenito
Repeat Client
Spain
Carmen realizó un informe detallado de lectura que, sinceramente, me sorprendió en su nivel de detalle y apreciación de temáticas, a veces muy sutiles, presentes en la obra. Fue crítica con el trabajo manteniendo en todo momento la cordialidad y haciendo gala de un enfoque objetivo y mucha atención al detalle.
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
C Seller's Response
Helpful?A anafhc
Spain
I am a graphic artist working on my first comic. My drawing skills are stronger than my writing skills and I needed some perspective and advice on the script for my comic. Carmen understood the task right away and was able to adapt her comments to the specific format I was working with. She gave me...
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
C Seller's Response
Helpful?G guillermomr13
Spain
Professional, honest, swift and meticulous. Carmen D provides a great service as a beta reader from start to finish, and provides a manuscript report that manages to be polite, insightful and truthful at the same time. She perfectly understands the assignment and delivers beyond expectations, all for...
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
C Seller's Response
Helpful?
