I will read your manuscript and provide a detailed reader report

Brazil

I speak Portuguese, English

I will beta read your manuscript and provide detailed reader feedback

As an eclectic reader, I evaluate stories of any genre through the most important lens of all: their ability to capture attention. Whether your manuscript is dark fantasy, a bold romance, a psychologi...
About this Gig

Welcome! Whether you are a first-time writer, an indie author, a fanfiction creator, or polishing a passion project, your manuscript is in safe hands.

As a text reviewer, language analyst, and avid reader across all genres, I combine technical precision with empathetic feedback. Your draft does not need to be perfect. I welcome rough drafts, polished novels, and early-stage ideas.

I evaluate your work through two lenses: the emotional journey of a engaged reader and the sharp eye of a professional proofreader.

My feedback will address:

  • Reader Retention & Pacing: Where the story grips the audience, where it drags or rushes, and where it risks losing tension.
  • Plot Logic & Consistency: Identifying plot holes, confusing passages, and lore issues.
  • Grammar & Text Polish: Pointing out typos, awkward phrasing, and flow.
  • The Opening Hook: Ensuring your first chapters build maximum momentum.

Bonus: Character Sheet Review extra available for deep-dive character profiles.

Languages: English & Portuguese.

  • I deliver honest, kind, and actionable reports that highlight what needs work while celebrating what already shines!

Language:

English

Portuguese

Spanish

Content Type:

Book

Short story

Other

Genre:

Adventure

Comic book

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

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