I will beta read your fiction and identify plot holes and inconsistencies

I will beta read your short story or fiction manuscript and provide thoughtful, detailed feedback from a reader's perspective.

I will look for plot holes, inconsistencies, confusing or illogical moments, character development, pacing, continuity, and places where the story loses or holds my attention.

I have decades of professional experience reviewing detailed technical material, where accuracy, consistency, and noticing when something doesn't make sense are essential skills. I am also a lifelong reader and fiction writer.

My feedback will be constructive, clear, and respectful. I'll tell you what is working as well as what may need another look.

This gig includes beta reading of up to 5,000 words and a written reader report.