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I will be your developmental editor

5.0
5.0

United Kingdom

I speak English

48 orders completed

It is my mission in life to help people write amazing stories!

I'm a freelance fiction editor, a speculative fiction writer, and a lifelong bookworm! I've been working with indie authors, publishers, and authors seeking traditional publication for the last three ...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

About this Gig

Please contact me directly before placing an order!


Are you looking for a friendly and enthusiastic developmental editor to help make your story the best it can be? I can identify strengths and weaknesses in your manuscript, and help you work out ways to make your story shine.


I provide feedback on:

  • Characters & character arcs
  • Plot development & plot holes
  • Story structure & pacing
  • Consistency of tense & narrative viewpoint
  • Consistency of world-building
  • Target audience
  • Writing style


I deliver detailed comments throughout your fiction manuscript, along with an in-depth editorial letter discussing overall feedback and suggestions.


I'm a native English speaker (UK-based) and a writer myself. I specialise in speculative fiction (e.g. fantasy, science fiction, horror).


I'm an Intermediate member of the UK's Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) and I work primarily with indie authors. I completed professional copyediting and proofreading training with the Blackford Centre for Proofreading. I also completed fiction editing training and developmental editing training with the CIEP.


Please see FAQs for more info.


I can't wait to hear from you!

Language:

English

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Science fiction

Fantasy

Audience :

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

15 reviews for this Gig
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    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
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    alichurton

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Claire, once again, you are certainly the right person to help me with my project. Thank you so much. hugely recommend your service to any budding writers like myself. You have understood the story and delivered exceptional advice and steer into making my story pop. thank you

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    ivankacerqueira

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    I can't quite put into words how wonderful it is to work with Claire. She has a deep understanding of her craft, is not scared to provide an honest unbiased feedback (which is appreciated). Still she does so with kindness and empathy. This is my second time working with her, so I already knew in a way...

    $400-$600

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

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    authordreams

    US

    United States

    5

    Absolutely blown away by the depth and quality of feedback on my book outline.

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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  • J

    jna1946

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Claire Bentley is AMAZING! Her book editing truly exceeded my expectations with professional work and meticulous attention to details. Working with her was a breeze thanks to her deep understanding and proactive communication. Highly recommend! 👏

    $400-$600

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jna1946

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Claire Bentley has an exceptional ability to read and dissect a manuscript so the author can see how it can be improved. Her developmental edits of my Novel " The Paperboy Chronicles" have more value than an entire semester of my Master's in Creative Writing.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

15 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(15)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • A

    alichurton

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Claire, once again, you are certainly the right person to help me with my project. Thank you so much. hugely recommend your service to any budding writers like myself. You have understood the story and delivered exceptional advice and steer into making my story pop. thank you

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • I
    image-docs

    ivankacerqueira

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    I can't quite put into words how wonderful it is to work with Claire. She has a deep understanding of her craft, is not scared to provide an honest unbiased feedback (which is appreciated). Still she does so with kindness and empathy. This is my second time working with her, so I already knew in a way...

    $400-$600

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
    image-docs

    authordreams

    US

    United States

    5

    Absolutely blown away by the depth and quality of feedback on my book outline.

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jna1946

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Claire Bentley is AMAZING! Her book editing truly exceeded my expectations with professional work and meticulous attention to details. Working with her was a breeze thanks to her deep understanding and proactive communication. Highly recommend! 👏

    $400-$600

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jna1946

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Claire Bentley has an exceptional ability to read and dissect a manuscript so the author can see how it can be improved. Her developmental edits of my Novel " The Paperboy Chronicles" have more value than an entire semester of my Master's in Creative Writing.

    $400-$600

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No