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I will be your developmental editor
It is my mission in life to help people write amazing stories!
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
Please contact me directly before placing an order!
Are you looking for a friendly and enthusiastic developmental editor to help make your story the best it can be? I can identify strengths and weaknesses in your manuscript, and help you work out ways to make your story shine.
I provide feedback on:
- Characters & character arcs
- Plot development & plot holes
- Story structure & pacing
- Consistency of tense & narrative viewpoint
- Consistency of world-building
- Target audience
- Writing style
I deliver detailed comments throughout your fiction manuscript, along with an in-depth editorial letter discussing overall feedback and suggestions.
I'm a native English speaker (UK-based) and a writer myself. I specialise in speculative fiction (e.g. fantasy, science fiction, horror).
I'm an Intermediate member of the UK's Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) and I work primarily with indie authors. I completed professional copyediting and proofreading training with the Blackford Centre for Proofreading. I also completed fiction editing training and developmental editing training with the CIEP.
Please see FAQs for more info.
I can't wait to hear from you!
Language:
English
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
Teen / young adult
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Adult
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What does developmental editing cover?
Developmental editing focuses on the 'big picture' view of your story's characters, plot, story structure, world-building etc. It looks at whether or not the over-arching story works. It does not focus on sentence-level changes or typos.
What level of work do you do for a developmental edit?
I go through the manuscript at least twice and leave detailed comments throughout. I also write an in-depth editorial report summarising my findings and suggestions. Obviously this is a lot of work, which is reflected in the price.
When is the best time for developmental editing?
Developmental editing comes before carrying out line and copyedits on your manuscript. I recommend carrying out your own rounds of developmental editing before sending your manuscript to an editor. There is no point decorating your house before the walls and foundations are finished!
Do you offer a sample edit?
I can offer a sample edit of 1000 words for $25. I will deduct the $25 fee from the editing total if you decide to book the larger edit with me.
What if I need something different?
Please message me if your requirements don't fit the packages offered, and I will see how I can help.
What if I have questions, either before or after you have provided the edit?
Please feel free to message me if you have any questions! I will always try my best to help.
What are your preferred genres?
My favourite genres are any which fall under speculative fiction (e.g. fantasy, science fiction, and horror). However, I read widely and I often edit other genres.
Do you use generative AI in your work?
I DO NOT use generative AI in any aspect of my editorial work. I ask that authors disclose whether (and to what extent) they have used generative AI in their fiction before booking with me. I reserve the right to refuse AI-generated work.
Do you offer manuscript evaluations?
Yes, I can offer you a manuscript evaluation for $150 per 10,000 words. This covers the same areas as the developmental edit and includes a detailed editorial report, but does NOT include in-manuscript feedback.
Do you review outlines?
Yes. If you let me know the word count then I can provide a custom quote.
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A alichurton
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
Claire, once again, you are certainly the right person to help me with my project. Thank you so much. hugely recommend your service to any budding writers like myself. You have understood the story and delivered exceptional advice and steer into making my story pop. thank you
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?I ivankacerqueira
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
I can't quite put into words how wonderful it is to work with Claire. She has a deep understanding of her craft, is not scared to provide an honest unbiased feedback (which is appreciated). Still she does so with kindness and empathy. This is my second time working with her, so I already knew in a way...
$400-$600
Price
7 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A 
authordreams

United States
Absolutely blown away by the depth and quality of feedback on my book outline.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jna1946
Repeat Client

United States
Claire Bentley is AMAZING! Her book editing truly exceeded my expectations with professional work and meticulous attention to details. Working with her was a breeze thanks to her deep understanding and proactive communication. Highly recommend! 👏
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jna1946
Repeat Client

United States
Claire Bentley has an exceptional ability to read and dissect a manuscript so the author can see how it can be improved. Her developmental edits of my Novel " The Paperboy Chronicles" have more value than an entire semester of my Master's in Creative Writing.
$400-$600
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
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A alichurton
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
Claire, once again, you are certainly the right person to help me with my project. Thank you so much. hugely recommend your service to any budding writers like myself. You have understood the story and delivered exceptional advice and steer into making my story pop. thank you
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?I ivankacerqueira
Repeat Client

United Kingdom
I can't quite put into words how wonderful it is to work with Claire. She has a deep understanding of her craft, is not scared to provide an honest unbiased feedback (which is appreciated). Still she does so with kindness and empathy. This is my second time working with her, so I already knew in a way...
$400-$600
Price
7 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A 
authordreams

United States
Absolutely blown away by the depth and quality of feedback on my book outline.
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jna1946
Repeat Client

United States
Claire Bentley is AMAZING! Her book editing truly exceeded my expectations with professional work and meticulous attention to details. Working with her was a breeze thanks to her deep understanding and proactive communication. Highly recommend! 👏
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jna1946
Repeat Client

United States
Claire Bentley has an exceptional ability to read and dissect a manuscript so the author can see how it can be improved. Her developmental edits of my Novel " The Paperboy Chronicles" have more value than an entire semester of my Master's in Creative Writing.
$400-$600
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?

