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I will professionally edit, format your cozy mystery, romance book or fantasy novels
Author Coach, Beta Reader, Developmental Editor and Book Formatter
Hi, I'm Charla! a certified tutor, writer, beta reader, developmental editor, formatter, and publishing support specialist with 10+ years of experience helping authors bring their stories to life. I p...
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About this Gig
Is your romance or dark fantasy novel not hitting the way you know it can?
As a specialized developmental editor, I help fiction authors transform good stories into great ones tightening plot holes, deepening character arcs, improving pacing, & making sure every scene earns its place.
WHAT I WILL FOCUS ON:
- Plot structure & story arc analysis
- Character development & motivation
- Pacing & scene-by-scene flow
- World-building consistency
- Romantic tension & subplot development
- Point of view (POV) clarity
- Detailed editorial letter with actionable feedback
I SPECIALIZE IN:
- Romance (contemporary, historical, paranormal)
- Dark Fantasy & Romantasy
- New Adult & Adult Fiction
WHAT YOU WILL RECEIVE:
- A thorough editorial letter (3-8 pages)
- Inline comments
- Scene-by-scene breakdown where needed
- Series continuity notes (Premium only)
WHY WORK WITH ME?
I treat every manuscript like it matters because it does. I give honest, constructive, & encouraging feedback that respects your creative vision while helping your story reach its full potential.
MESSAGE ME BEFORE ORDERING if you have a word count over 55,000 or need a custom quote. I am happy to work with you.
Let's make your story unforgettable.
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FAQ
What is the difference between proofreading and developmental editing?
Proofreading fixes grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Developmental editing focuses on plot, pacing, characters, and structure.
Can you edit unfinished drafts?
Yes. Many authors hire editors to review early drafts to fix structural issues before publishing.
Do you work with Amazon KDP authors?
Yes. I help authors preparing manuscripts for Amazon KDP self-publishing.
Will you rewrite my book?
No. I provide professional editing, suggestions, and improvements while preserving your voice.
Is my manuscript confidential?
Absolutely. Your work is safe and never shared.
What genres do you specialize in?
Paranormal romance, YA fiction, supernatural thrillers, dark fantasy, romantic suspense.
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Ongoing collaborationCharla has been a life-saver and went above and beyond in delivering ALL of my requests in a timely manner. I'm thrilled with the results and excited to work with her again! Definitely reach out to her for all your needs!
$100-$200
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Helpful?T tricia_2026
United States
Ongoing collaborationWhat an amazing experience, so helpful and so experienced! Can’t wait to work with her again!
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T tricia_2026
United States
Ongoing collaborationCharla has been a life-saver and went above and beyond in delivering ALL of my requests in a timely manner. I'm thrilled with the results and excited to work with her again! Definitely reach out to her for all your needs!
$100-$200
Price
1 day
Duration
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Helpful?T tricia_2026
United States
Ongoing collaborationWhat an amazing experience, so helpful and so experienced! Can’t wait to work with her again!
$100-$200
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5 days
Duration
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