I will review your fiction manuscript with actionable feedback

United Kingdom

I speak English

Fiction Manuscript Reviewer Beta Reader

Hi, I'm Charlotte Bennett Pro, a professional fiction manuscript reviewer dedicated to helping authors improve their stories. I provide honest, actionable feedback on plot, pacing, character developme...
About this Gig

Looking for honest, actionable feedback before publishing your novel? You're in the right place!


I will review your fiction manuscript from a reader's perspective and provide detailed feedback to help strengthen your story. My review focuses on what engages readers and what may need improvement.


You'll receive feedback on:


  • Plot & story structure
  • Character development
  • Pacing & flow
  • Dialogue
  • World-building (where applicable)
  • Consistency & clarity
  • Reader engagement
  • Overall strengths and areas for improvement


Each order includes a professional reader report, and selected packages also include sample line edits. I work with Romance, Fantasy, Thriller, Mystery, Science Fiction, Young Adult, Historical Fiction, and more.


Please Note:

This is a beta reading service, not proofreading or full developmental editing. My goal is to provide honest, constructive, and actionable feedback to help you improve your manuscript.


Order now or send me a message if you have any questions before placing your order!

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Horror/ thriller

Mystery

Romance

Fantasy

Language:

English

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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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