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I will beta read your middle grade fantasy book with detailed feedback
Editor and Beta Reader for Authors and Educators
Hi! I’m Chelsi, an editor, beta reader, and literacy specialist passionate about helping writers create clear, engaging content. I hold dual bachelor’s degrees in English and history, a minor in creat...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Are you looking for detailed beta reading feedback on your middle-grade fantasy manuscript?
As a full-time middle-grade teacher, I understand what engages young readers and what can confuse or lose their interest, especially in fantasy stories. I provide thoughtful, constructive beta reading feedback to help strengthen your story, improve clarity, and better connect with your audience.
I know sharing your writing can feel vulnerable, and I approach every manuscript with care, encouragement, and honest insight.
What you'll receive:
-A reader report with feedback on:
- plot and pacing
- character development
- clarity and engagement
- overall reader experience
-Answers to your questions (based on your selected package)
-Light in-text comments highlighting:
- strengths
- confusing sections
- areas for improvement
If your manuscript exceeds the listed word counts or you'd like something tailored to your project, feel free to message me for a custom offer.
When you're ready, place your order or reach out with any questions. I'd love to help bring your story to life!
Genre:
Children’s books
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Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What is beta reading?
Beta reading provides feedback from a reader’s perspective. I focus on engagement, clarity, pacing, and how your story will be experienced by middle-grade fantasy readers.
What types of books do you specialize in?
I have expertise in all types of middle-grade fiction and children's chapter books. However, my favorite genre is middle-grade fantasy.
What will I receive with my order?
You will receive thoughtful feedback based on your selected package. This may include reader reactions, in-line comments, and/or a detailed reader report with strengths and suggestions for improvement. I also provide answers to your specific questions based on your tier.
Do you edit grammar and punctuation?
No—this gig focuses on reader feedback and story clarity. If you are looking for proofreading or line editing, please check out my other gig or message me for details.
Can you review my full manuscript?
Yes! You can add extra words when ordering or message me for a custom offer for longer manuscripts.
What does the revision include?
One revision is included for clarification or follow-up questions about your feedback. It does not include rereading revised sections or new content.
How should I send my manuscript?
Please send your manuscript as a Word document or Google Doc. You can also include any specific questions or areas where you would like focused feedback.
Will you rewrite or fix sections of my book?
No, I do not rewrite or line edit in this gig. My goal is to provide clear, helpful feedback so you can strengthen your fantasy story while maintaining your voice.
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A ashton123321
United States
Ongoing collaboration10/10 I would work with her again. She was exactly what I wanted in a beta reader and provided great feedback on what worked and what needed to be improved on.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?E 
ellaananeva
United States
Chelsi's feedback was very useful, and I got a lot of actionable tips. I certainly recommend her to anyone interested in a thorough reading of their manuscript!
$100-$200
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M martha_levitsky
United States
Ongoing collaborationI love working with Chelsi. She's incredibly encouraging! She finds the points that writers just simply miss because we're too close to the character and story. Her in line commentary as she reads the story is incredibly valuable, giving us a real reader perspective of the story! Thanks so much for such an insightful beta read.
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M martha_levitsky
United States
Ongoing collaborationA perfect beta read. Chelsi delivered exactly what I needed, the exact points she got confused in the story and most importantly at the very beginning of the story, the vital point to catch the interest of a reader. Her encouragement and interest in the story, characters and what she wants to know that...
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?J 
jasonkain
United States
Very thorough and helpful insight!
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
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Most relevant
A ashton123321
United States
Ongoing collaboration10/10 I would work with her again. She was exactly what I wanted in a beta reader and provided great feedback on what worked and what needed to be improved on.
$100-$200
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?E ellaananeva
United States
Chelsi's feedback was very useful, and I got a lot of actionable tips. I certainly recommend her to anyone interested in a thorough reading of their manuscript!
$100-$200
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M martha_levitsky
United States
Ongoing collaborationI love working with Chelsi. She's incredibly encouraging! She finds the points that writers just simply miss because we're too close to the character and story. Her in line commentary as she reads the story is incredibly valuable, giving us a real reader perspective of the story! Thanks so much for such an insightful beta read.
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M martha_levitsky
United States
Ongoing collaborationA perfect beta read. Chelsi delivered exactly what I needed, the exact points she got confused in the story and most importantly at the very beginning of the story, the vital point to catch the interest of a reader. Her encouragement and interest in the story, characters and what she wants to know that...
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?J jasonkain
United States
Very thorough and helpful insight!
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
