I will beta read and provide feedback on your story or novel
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What people loved about this freelancer
daniel_w_storm

Croatia
Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and...
gtw02126

United States
I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show...
khayn29

United States
Chris' report was great! He went above and beyond with his feedback. It was targeted and actionable. It gave me a lot to think about and how to fix my story....
summer50000

United States
Chris is an outstanding fiction reviewer. He provides deep, perceptive comments from the perspective of a writer who knows what you are trying to do. I truly...
karin_mai

United States
The beta reader report provided by Chris was thorough and well organized. He provided feedback on multiple areas - i.e. plot and story, worldbuilding, dialogue,...
About this Gig
NOW BOOKING SLOTS FOR *JUL/AUG 2026.* Contact me before ordering.
PREMIUM BETA READING for your short, mid-range, or novel-length fiction, including in-line comments, style editing, and proofreading that moves you faster toward traditional or self-publishing.
Hundreds of honest and polite in-line comments offer brief reader reactions, lengthier observations, and actionable suggestions within your manuscript.
Hundreds of in-line edits focus on spelling, grammar, and style. I read each word carefully and conscientiously.
The multi-page Beta Reader Report provides thoughtful, thorough notes on "What Works," "What to Work On," and responses to your initial comments and questions. I'll consider:
- Pace
- Plot & story
- Point of view
- Character arcs
- Potential points of confusion
- Narrative structure
- World-building
- Dialogue
- ...and more
I have a BA (Honors) in Creative Writing & English. I'm happy to read any genre for all ages and audiences, including but not limited to science fiction, fantasy, romance, crime, thriller, mystery, adventure, literary, upmarket, Christian, YA, and more. I want your fiction to shine. Let's get started!
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
My piece is mid-range between the word counts in your packages. Will you charge me the full amount? Do you read more than 80k? Do you do Milestones?
If your piece falls between the packages or exceeds 80k, send me a message with the exact word count, and I'll reply ASAP with a Custom Offer that will save you money. I do not offer "Milestone" projects. You will need to pay for the entire order upfront.
What type of file do you need?
I prefer a Word document (.doc or .docx) so that I can turn on "track changes," and you can easily follow my comments and suggestions. I can work with a PDF if needed, but this limits my ability for proofreading and stylistic edits. I do not work with Google Docs or any other form of cloud-sharing.
Do you need a "trigger warning" if my piece features violence, profanity, etc.?
Not at all, although if you'd like to give me a heads-up, that's fine.
Can I send you my novel chapter by chapter rather than all at once, like a developmental edit?
I do not accept chapters one by one in a single order. I need the entirety of the piece you want me to beta-read when the order is placed. Alternatively, we can arrange for separate orders. For example, the first order can include Chapters 1 and 2; the second order, Chapters 3 and 4; and so on.
If I make a big change to my piece while you're reviewing it, can I send you an updated copy?
No. I prefer to work with the piece you sent me. After I return your piece, you can always rework it and then resubmit it to me as a new order.
If I purchase a second beta read for an updated version of the same piece, will you read it?
Of course! I know works in progress will likely go through many drafts, so whether it's a week later or a year later, you're welcome to purchase a second round of reading. I'm happy to be your fresh pair of eyes!
What can I expect from the delivery?
You'll receive a copy of your manuscript with easily identifiable in-line edits and comments, along with a Reader Report. The Reader Report typically consists of about 3 to 6 pages for 39,000 words or less and about 5 to 7+ pages for 40,000 words or more.
Do you speed-read? Do you use AI?
I do NOT speed-read; I read every word personally. I use AI (Gemini/Grammarly) to polish my notes, catch consistency issues, and audit for plot holes. This "human-led, AI-augmented" check ensures high-quality, professional feedback. I vet and finalize every word I send.
What's your process? How much time will you spend with my manuscript? Will you keep me updated on your progress?
I work 3 to 4 hours daily, Monday through Friday. I read, edit, and comment on 2,000 to 4,000 words per hour. After reading, I spend 2 to 6 hours reviewing my comments and preparing the Reader Report. I usually work on one project at a time. I offer clients brief progress updates every 5 to 10 days.
What if I have questions based on your feedback?
After I deliver your order and you have had a chance to review my comments, you can contact me again. I'll set up a "Custom Offer" for a writer-directed follow-up: you can provide me with a list of questions to answer via Word doc, or we can video chat via Fiverr's Zoom platform.
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daniel_w_storm

Croatia
Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and his editorial notes were spot on. Highly recommend him to any author looking for honest, professional feedback
$50-$100
Price
3 days
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Helpful?G gtw02126
Repeat Client

United States
I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show where or how a reader might react, or detailed comments that highlight the nuances of grammar or help with prose, his feedback is always great. He...
$400-$600
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7 weeks
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khayn29
Repeat Client

United States
Chris' report was great! He went above and beyond with his feedback. It was targeted and actionable. It gave me a lot to think about and how to fix my story. This is my second story that he has beta read and I will return with any other books I have.
Up to $50
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2 days
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summer50000
Repeat Client

United States
Chris is an outstanding fiction reviewer. He provides deep, perceptive comments from the perspective of a writer who knows what you are trying to do. I truly appreciate the care and delicacy with which he offers feedback. There is a lot that goes into writing and Chris knows the techincal and artistic...
$50-$100
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5 days
Duration
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Helpful?K karin_mai

United States
The beta reader report provided by Chris was thorough and well organized. He provided feedback on multiple areas - i.e. plot and story, worldbuilding, dialogue, characterization, etc. His style was very reader-focused and clarity-driven, and he highlighted both strengths and areas for improvement. I would recommend him 100%.
$100-$200
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4 weeks
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daniel_w_storm

Croatia
Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and his editorial notes were spot on. Highly recommend him to any author looking for honest, professional feedback
$50-$100
Price
3 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?G gtw02126
Repeat Client

United States
I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show where or how a reader might react, or detailed comments that highlight the nuances of grammar or help with prose, his feedback is always great. He...
$400-$600
Price
7 weeks
Duration
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khayn29
Repeat Client

United States
Chris' report was great! He went above and beyond with his feedback. It was targeted and actionable. It gave me a lot to think about and how to fix my story. This is my second story that he has beta read and I will return with any other books I have.
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
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summer50000
Repeat Client

United States
Chris is an outstanding fiction reviewer. He provides deep, perceptive comments from the perspective of a writer who knows what you are trying to do. I truly appreciate the care and delicacy with which he offers feedback. There is a lot that goes into writing and Chris knows the techincal and artistic...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
C 
Seller's Response
Helpful?K karin_mai

United States
The beta reader report provided by Chris was thorough and well organized. He provided feedback on multiple areas - i.e. plot and story, worldbuilding, dialogue, characterization, etc. His style was very reader-focused and clarity-driven, and he highlighted both strengths and areas for improvement. I would recommend him 100%.
$100-$200
Price
4 weeks
Duration
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