I will beta read and provide feedback on your story or novel

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

278 orders completed

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Professional developmental reader with a BA in English & Creative Writing. As a US Marine veteran, I bring a high level of discipline and a sharp, analytical eye to every narrative. I've spent years c...

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About this Gig

NOW BOOKING SLOTS FOR *JUL/AUG 2026.* Contact me before ordering.


PREMIUM BETA READING for your short, mid-range, or novel-length fiction, including in-line comments, style editing, and proofreading that moves you faster toward traditional or self-publishing.


Hundreds of honest and polite in-line comments offer brief reader reactions, lengthier observations, and actionable suggestions within your manuscript.


Hundreds of in-line edits focus on spelling, grammar, and style. I read each word carefully and conscientiously.


The multi-page Beta Reader Report provides thoughtful, thorough notes on "What Works," "What to Work On," and responses to your initial comments and questions. I'll consider:


  • Pace
  • Plot & story
  • Point of view
  • Character arcs
  • Potential points of confusion
  • Narrative structure
  • World-building
  • Dialogue
  • ...and more


I have a BA (Honors) in Creative Writing & English. I'm happy to read any genre for all ages and audiences, including but not limited to science fiction, fantasy, romance, crime, thriller, mystery, adventure, literary, upmarket, Christian, YA, and more. I want your fiction to shine. Let's get started!

Genre:

Adventure

Humor/ entertainment

Literary fiction

Mystery

Language:

English

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Reviews

221 reviews for this Gig
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    daniel_w_storm

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    Croatia

    5

    Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and his editorial notes were spot on. Highly recommend him to any author looking for honest, professional feedback

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    gtw02126

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show where or how a reader might react, or detailed comments that highlight the nuances of grammar or help with prose, his feedback is always great. He...

    $400-$600

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    khayn29

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris' report was great! He went above and beyond with his feedback. It was targeted and actionable. It gave me a lot to think about and how to fix my story. This is my second story that he has beta read and I will return with any other books I have.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    summer50000

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris is an outstanding fiction reviewer. He provides deep, perceptive comments from the perspective of a writer who knows what you are trying to do. I truly appreciate the care and delicacy with which he offers feedback. There is a lot that goes into writing and Chris knows the techincal and artistic...

    $50-$100

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    No
  • K

    karin_mai

    US

    United States

    5

    The beta reader report provided by Chris was thorough and well organized. He provided feedback on multiple areas - i.e. plot and story, worldbuilding, dialogue, characterization, etc. His style was very reader-focused and clarity-driven, and he highlighted both strengths and areas for improvement. I would recommend him 100%.

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

221 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(218)
(0)
(3)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • D
    image-docs

    daniel_w_storm

    HR

    Croatia

    5

    Fantastic experience. Chris provided sharp, actionable feedback on my crime thriller. His military background gave him a great eye for tactical details, and his editorial notes were spot on. Highly recommend him to any author looking for honest, professional feedback

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G

    gtw02126

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I've been working with Chris for about two years now, and he has never failed to deliver exceptional work. Whether it's little snippets here or there that show where or how a reader might react, or detailed comments that highlight the nuances of grammar or help with prose, his feedback is always great. He...

    $400-$600

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K
    image-docs

    khayn29

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris' report was great! He went above and beyond with his feedback. It was targeted and actionable. It gave me a lot to think about and how to fix my story. This is my second story that he has beta read and I will return with any other books I have.

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    summer50000

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Chris is an outstanding fiction reviewer. He provides deep, perceptive comments from the perspective of a writer who knows what you are trying to do. I truly appreciate the care and delicacy with which he offers feedback. There is a lot that goes into writing and Chris knows the techincal and artistic...

    $50-$100

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K

    karin_mai

    US

    United States

    5

    The beta reader report provided by Chris was thorough and well organized. He provided feedback on multiple areas - i.e. plot and story, worldbuilding, dialogue, characterization, etc. His style was very reader-focused and clarity-driven, and he highlighted both strengths and areas for improvement. I would recommend him 100%.

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No