I will review your UK civil service application

United Kingdom

I speak English

8 orders completed

Civil Service Applications

With over 20 years of experience in the UK Civil Service, I help applicants strengthen their Civil Service applications using the Success Profiles framework. I don't just rewrite applications. I help...

Level 1

Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.

About this Gig

Applying for a UK Civil Service role and want an expert second opinion before you submit?


With over 20 years' UK Civil Service experience, I understand the Success Profiles framework and what strong application evidence needs to demonstrate.


I will review your application document, identify weaknesses and show you where your evidence could be clearer and stronger. Where necessary, I may ask targeted questions to uncover stronger evidence from your genuine experience.


I can review your CV, Statement of Suitability, Personal/Supporting Statement or Success Profiles behaviour example.


My review can identify:

  • Weak or missing evidence
  • Examples that don't fully meet the criteria
  • Unclear personal contribution
  • Weak STAR structure
  • Missing results or measurable impact
  • Generic or descriptive content


This service covers one existing document. For writing from scratch, please contact me first.


For feedback on a single Behaviour Example, see my dedicated Behaviour service.

Suitable for AO, EO, HEO and SEO applications.


Please send your document, the job advert and any sift feedback.


Recruitment decisions are made by the hiring department results can't be guaranteed.

Language:

English

Content type:

Personal statement

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Documents

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Other

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