I will edit your book with copy, line, and developmental edits
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docscottjohnson

United States
Cindy is exceptional! Her edit was great. but the comments were invaluable to polish my manuscript. She paid very close attention to detail and identified continuity...
sdcinnovate

United States
I had the pleasure of working with Cindy on the early chapters of my book, and her feedback was incredibly valuable. She provided thoughtful, detailed insights...
drannisemabry

United States
Working with Cindy was an absolute game-changer for my manuscript. From the very first edit, it was clear that she doesn’t just correct writing, she elevates...
aohigham

United States
Cindy went above and beyond. she even researched areas giving me the best chance to fit clarity. She did not disappoint infact I was so impressed at her attention to detail. She is brilliant!
vielkamcfarlane

United States
Cindy treated my work with respect and gave us back much more than we expected. Will use her again and again.
About this Gig
Let's strategically improve what ails your novel or non-fiction book (This editing service is NOT for children's books or picture books). As a book doctor and collaborative editor, my work tightens the narrative flow, identifies plot holes, inconsistencies, and missed story beats, all while making dialogue and scenes more impactful with line editing and margin comments. This attention to detail ensures strong reader engagement while preserving your voice and story arc.
I offer:
- Line editing for enhanced clarity, flow, and readability
- Developmental feedback on structure and more
- Detailed margin comments and sample paragraph rewrites
- Editorial or reader analysis tailored to your goals
Please scroll through my reviews, the image gallery, my portfolio, and look online for insight into past projects across almost all genres.
I will return the following:
- Edited Word doc showing comments and tracked changes
- Clean doc with edits accepted
- Screenshot of Word's count of edits
- Feedback and final thoughts
I look forward to helping you sharpen your manuscript and bring your story to life!
Warm Regards,
Cindy Draughon
Language:
English
Genre:
Children’s books
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Literary fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
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Clients I’ve worked with
Holly Bargo
I've edited 20 book manuscripts for Karen Smith (pen name: Holly Bargo) through Hen House Publishing. I deliver a deep edit that includes a developmental analysis. Once she addresses my comments, I read through the 'script again for a final proof.
Dec 2022-Dec 2022
My Portfolio
FAQ
Do you apply the same deep editing to lengthy manuscripts?
Yes. I've edited several especially long books (and trilogies) that were well over 100,000 words, and it is typical to find dangling story threads and inconsistencies in books of this length, so it is helpful to have an editor with a solid work ethic who pays attention to the most minute details.
Why don't your packages include revisions?
I always do my best work on a project the first time through. If requested on the premium package, for a flat rate of $50 I will take a look at revisions the author makes throughout the manuscript based on the comments I left in the margin. For one or two changes, no charge.
What is line editing? Does it change my voice?
Heavy line editing includes structural and word choice changes to sentences (and sometimes paragraphs) to tighten the language WITHOUT CHANGING YOUR VOICE or meaning, for improved clarity, flow and impact. My work includes extensive line-editing that improves language usage and removes filler words.
What makes your deep editing so special?
I've been an editor for many years and have never come across a manuscript that couldn't be improved by the insight I provide even when a manuscript seems so polished that it only needs a final proofread. My goal is to help you bring forth the best possible version of your manuscript.
Why don't you edit cookbooks, poetry and children's books?
I have a separate gig for editing children's books. Since the work is so specialized the rates are higher. Poetry is so individualized and word/punctuation specific that I don't want to take on the task of identifying what should be edited. Cookbook 'scripts contain a high degree of inconsistency.
Why isn't a FINAL proofread included with your standard and premium editing packages?
Proofreading is the FINAL step in the editing process. With deeper edits, issues are ALWAYS uncovered that go beyond the scope of editing and must be addressed by the author. Therefore, changes will be made to the manuscript, so a final proof at the point I return the editing would be premature.
What does your rewriting involve?
I don't rewrite your manuscript, but I do apply line editing to sentences and paragraphs. In addition, if it seems something could be strengthened with a different approach, for example the beginning of a chapter, I often offer a sample rewrite of that part in a comment in the margin.
Why do you like to start with a sample edit?
Experience shows that no matter how clear I try to be with my service, sometimes authors expect something other than what I offer for my standard or premiums packages. A sample edit helps an author determine if my work is useful to them before they commit to spending more.
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docscottjohnson
Repeat Client

United States
Cindy is exceptional! Her edit was great. but the comments were invaluable to polish my manuscript. She paid very close attention to detail and identified continuity errors that needed adjusted. I would definitely work with her again and highly recommend her!
$1,000-$1,500
Price
6 weeks
Duration
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Helpful?S sdcinnovate
Repeat Client

United States
I had the pleasure of working with Cindy on the early chapters of my book, and her feedback was incredibly valuable. She provided thoughtful, detailed insights that helped me step back and look at my story from a reader’s perspective—especially around clarity, structure, and how to better anchor the...
Up to $50
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4 days
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drannisemabry
Repeat Client

United States
Working with Cindy was an absolute game-changer for my manuscript. From the very first edit, it was clear that she doesn’t just correct writing, she elevates it. She took my prologue for Unpaid but Unbroken and strengthened the clarity, flow, and structure while preserving my voice and the integrity...
Up to $50
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1 day
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Helpful?A aohigham

United States
Cindy went above and beyond. she even researched areas giving me the best chance to fit clarity. She did not disappoint infact I was so impressed at her attention to detail. She is brilliant!
$1,500-$2,000
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?V vielkamcfarlane

United States
Cindy treated my work with respect and gave us back much more than we expected. Will use her again and again.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
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docscottjohnson
Repeat Client

United States
Cindy is exceptional! Her edit was great. but the comments were invaluable to polish my manuscript. She paid very close attention to detail and identified continuity errors that needed adjusted. I would definitely work with her again and highly recommend her!
$1,000-$1,500
Price
6 weeks
Duration
C 
Seller's Response
Helpful?S sdcinnovate
Repeat Client

United States
I had the pleasure of working with Cindy on the early chapters of my book, and her feedback was incredibly valuable. She provided thoughtful, detailed insights that helped me step back and look at my story from a reader’s perspective—especially around clarity, structure, and how to better anchor the...
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
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drannisemabry
Repeat Client

United States
Working with Cindy was an absolute game-changer for my manuscript. From the very first edit, it was clear that she doesn’t just correct writing, she elevates it. She took my prologue for Unpaid but Unbroken and strengthened the clarity, flow, and structure while preserving my voice and the integrity...
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?A aohigham

United States
Cindy went above and beyond. she even researched areas giving me the best chance to fit clarity. She did not disappoint infact I was so impressed at her attention to detail. She is brilliant!
$1,500-$2,000
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?V vielkamcfarlane

United States
Cindy treated my work with respect and gave us back much more than we expected. Will use her again and again.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
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