I will edit your book with copy, line, and developmental edits

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

1,900 orders completed

Experienced book editor trusted by authors and publishers worldwide

Hello! I've studied book structure and the art of writing and editing for nearly 20 years. I've written novels, a memoir, and picture books, and helped 1,000+ authors strengthen their fiction and non-...

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About this Gig

Let's strategically improve what ails your novel or non-fiction book (This editing service is NOT for children's books or picture books). As a book doctor and collaborative editor, my work tightens the narrative flow, identifies plot holes, inconsistencies, and missed story beats, all while making dialogue and scenes more impactful with line editing and margin comments. This attention to detail ensures strong reader engagement while preserving your voice and story arc.

 

I offer:


  • Line editing for enhanced clarity, flow, and readability
  • Developmental feedback on structure and more
  • Detailed margin comments and sample paragraph rewrites
  • Editorial or reader analysis tailored to your goals


Please scroll through my reviews, the image gallery, my portfolio, and look online for insight into past projects across almost all genres.


I will return the following:


  • Edited Word doc showing comments and tracked changes
  • Clean doc with edits accepted
  • Screenshot of Word's count of edits
  • Feedback and final thoughts


I look forward to helping you sharpen your manuscript and bring your story to life!

 

Warm Regards,

Cindy Draughon

Language:

English

Genre:

Children’s books

Literary fiction

Fantasy

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

Tone:

Informal

Conversational

Humorous

Serious

Emotional

Dramatic

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Clients I’ve worked with
Holly Bargo

Holly Bargo

I've edited 20 book manuscripts for Karen Smith (pen name: Holly Bargo) through Hen House Publishing. I deliver a deep edit that includes a developmental analysis. Once she addresses my comments, I read through the 'script again for a final proof.

Dec 2022-Dec 2022

My Portfolio

Reviews

469 reviews for this Gig
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    docscottjohnson

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy is exceptional! Her edit was great. but the comments were invaluable to polish my manuscript. She paid very close attention to detail and identified continuity errors that needed adjusted. I would definitely work with her again and highly recommend her!

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    No
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    sdcinnovate

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I had the pleasure of working with Cindy on the early chapters of my book, and her feedback was incredibly valuable. She provided thoughtful, detailed insights that helped me step back and look at my story from a reader’s perspective—especially around clarity, structure, and how to better anchor the...

    Up to $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    drannisemabry

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Cindy was an absolute game-changer for my manuscript. From the very first edit, it was clear that she doesn’t just correct writing, she elevates it. She took my prologue for Unpaid but Unbroken and strengthened the clarity, flow, and structure while preserving my voice and the integrity...

    Up to $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
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  • A

    aohigham

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Cindy went above and beyond. she even researched areas giving me the best chance to fit clarity. She did not disappoint infact I was so impressed at her attention to detail. She is brilliant!

    $1,500-$2,000

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • V

    vielkamcfarlane

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy treated my work with respect and gave us back much more than we expected. Will use her again and again.

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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Reviews

469 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(459)
(6)
(3)
(1)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • D
    image-docs

    docscottjohnson

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy is exceptional! Her edit was great. but the comments were invaluable to polish my manuscript. She paid very close attention to detail and identified continuity errors that needed adjusted. I would definitely work with her again and highly recommend her!

    $1,000-$1,500

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    sdcinnovate

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I had the pleasure of working with Cindy on the early chapters of my book, and her feedback was incredibly valuable. She provided thoughtful, detailed insights that helped me step back and look at my story from a reader’s perspective—especially around clarity, structure, and how to better anchor the...

    Up to $50

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    drannisemabry

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Cindy was an absolute game-changer for my manuscript. From the very first edit, it was clear that she doesn’t just correct writing, she elevates it. She took my prologue for Unpaid but Unbroken and strengthened the clarity, flow, and structure while preserving my voice and the integrity...

    Up to $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A

    aohigham

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Cindy went above and beyond. she even researched areas giving me the best chance to fit clarity. She did not disappoint infact I was so impressed at her attention to detail. She is brilliant!

    $1,500-$2,000

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • V

    vielkamcfarlane

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy treated my work with respect and gave us back much more than we expected. Will use her again and again.

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No