I will line edit and further develop picture books

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

1,900 orders completed

Experienced book editor trusted by authors and publishers worldwide

Hello! I've studied book structure and the art of writing and editing for nearly 20 years. I've written novels, a memoir, and picture books, and helped 1,000+ authors strengthen their fiction and non-...

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About this Gig

I am a top-rated book editor with more than 400 picture book editing projects completed and two of my own published. I am also the in-house editor for a picture book publisher. I specialize in editing picture books for rhythm, rhyme, flow, and emotional resonance no matter what age you are writing for.


Please see my gallery & portfolio for just a few examples and read my FAQs for more information.


In what usually turns out to be 2-3 or more editing passes through your story, I rework phrasing or flesh out scenes for impact if needed, trim filler words, and improve the story to bring it full circle. Whatever is needed. I retain your voice and the original story arc and return a polished, PROOFREAD story.


Revisions after you review the work are not included in this pricing structure, but I'm happy to respond to questions and/or concerns.


For rhyming books, meter/cadence/beats and the rhyming scheme is also improved.


For an additional $15 I offer illustration suggestions specific to your book. For an additional $10 I'll share information to consider as you work with illustrators. Please message me for this add-on.


I look forward to working with you!


Cindy

Language:

English

Genre:

Children’s books

Religion/ spirituality

Romance

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

Tone:

Formal

Informal

Conversational

Humorous

Serious

Emotional

Delivery style preference

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Clients I’ve worked with
Holly Bargo

Holly Bargo

I've edited 20 book manuscripts for Karen Smith (pen name: Holly Bargo) through Hen House Publishing. I deliver a deep edit that includes a developmental analysis. Once she addresses my comments, I read through the 'script again for a final proof.

Dec 2022-Dec 2022

My Portfolio

Reviews

263 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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    4.9
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    4.9
  • Value of delivery
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    sdcinnovate

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy was an incredible help in editing Teresa and Friend Ful’s book. She brought thoughtful insight and asked important questions that helped strengthen the story and make readers think deeper about the characters and their experiences. Some of her feedback really stood out, such as asking whether...

    $400-$600

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jackiereinig

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy demonstrated impressive speed and professionalism throughout the process. Her timely communication and informative updates made a significant difference, and she delivered excellent results that were well worth the investment. Her input was spot on and very helpful to someone who needs a lot of help.

    $50-$100

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
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    No
  • H
    image-docs

    hydrowave

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Cindy for the second time has been a total game-changer for my children's book projects. She has an incredible grasp of the Southwestern vibe and the specific geography of my town, which is vital for the authenticity of my brand. Cindy provided exactly what I was looking for: a tight, emotional...

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    drannisemabry

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy delivered an exceptional editing experience from start to finish. Her work on my latest chapter was not only thorough, but deeply intentional. She did more than correct grammar or structure. She elevated the clarity, strengthened the flow, and preserved the integrity of my voice in a way that felt...

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E

    emily_pann

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy delivered exactly what I asked, made the story flow much better overall, and kept the voice and intent in tact. She was great to work with, and delivered everything right on time. I highly recommend working with Cindy! She was fantastic!

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

263 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(251)
(10)
(1)
(0)
(1)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • S

    sdcinnovate

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy was an incredible help in editing Teresa and Friend Ful’s book. She brought thoughtful insight and asked important questions that helped strengthen the story and make readers think deeper about the characters and their experiences. Some of her feedback really stood out, such as asking whether...

    $400-$600

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J

    jackiereinig

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy demonstrated impressive speed and professionalism throughout the process. Her timely communication and informative updates made a significant difference, and she delivered excellent results that were well worth the investment. Her input was spot on and very helpful to someone who needs a lot of help.

    $50-$100

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • H
    image-docs

    hydrowave

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Cindy for the second time has been a total game-changer for my children's book projects. She has an incredible grasp of the Southwestern vibe and the specific geography of my town, which is vital for the authenticity of my brand. Cindy provided exactly what I was looking for: a tight, emotional...

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    drannisemabry

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy delivered an exceptional editing experience from start to finish. Her work on my latest chapter was not only thorough, but deeply intentional. She did more than correct grammar or structure. She elevated the clarity, strengthened the flow, and preserved the integrity of my voice in a way that felt...

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E

    emily_pann

    US

    United States

    5

    Cindy delivered exactly what I asked, made the story flow much better overall, and kept the voice and intent in tact. She was great to work with, and delivered everything right on time. I highly recommend working with Cindy! She was fantastic!

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No