I will line edit and further develop picture books
Experienced book editor trusted by authors and publishers worldwide
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What people loved about this freelancer
sdcinnovate

United States
Cindy was an incredible help in editing Teresa and Friend Ful’s book. She brought thoughtful insight and asked important questions that helped strengthen the...
jackiereinig

United States
Cindy demonstrated impressive speed and professionalism throughout the process. Her timely communication and informative updates made a significant difference,...
hydrowave

United States
Working with Cindy for the second time has been a total game-changer for my children's book projects. She has an incredible grasp of the Southwestern vibe and...
drannisemabry

United States
Cindy delivered an exceptional editing experience from start to finish. Her work on my latest chapter was not only thorough, but deeply intentional. She did...
emily_pann

United States
Cindy delivered exactly what I asked, made the story flow much better overall, and kept the voice and intent in tact. She was great to work with, and delivered...
About this Gig
I am a top-rated book editor with more than 400 picture book editing projects completed and two of my own published. I am also the in-house editor for a picture book publisher. I specialize in editing picture books for rhythm, rhyme, flow, and emotional resonance no matter what age you are writing for.
Please see my gallery & portfolio for just a few examples and read my FAQs for more information.
In what usually turns out to be 2-3 or more editing passes through your story, I rework phrasing or flesh out scenes for impact if needed, trim filler words, and improve the story to bring it full circle. Whatever is needed. I retain your voice and the original story arc and return a polished, PROOFREAD story.
Revisions after you review the work are not included in this pricing structure, but I'm happy to respond to questions and/or concerns.
For rhyming books, meter/cadence/beats and the rhyming scheme is also improved.
For an additional $15 I offer illustration suggestions specific to your book. For an additional $10 I'll share information to consider as you work with illustrators. Please message me for this add-on.
I look forward to working with you!
Cindy
Language:
English
Genre:
Children’s books
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Religion/ spirituality
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Romance
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
Delivery style preference
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Clients I’ve worked with
Holly Bargo
I've edited 20 book manuscripts for Karen Smith (pen name: Holly Bargo) through Hen House Publishing. I deliver a deep edit that includes a developmental analysis. Once she addresses my comments, I read through the 'script again for a final proof.
Dec 2022-Dec 2022
My Portfolio
FAQ
Do you ghostwrite?
I don't call what I do 'ghostwriting' for the simple reason that I BUILD upon YOUR writing. Or write specific scenes if you're stuck or simply want a scene or the climax to be more exciting or poignant, etc., just give me some bullet points to work from. You won't be disappointed.
Why do you charge more for a book that rhymes?
As any author knows, finding the proper words for a rhyming book is difficult without adding superfluous words or descriptions that often do not make much sense. Writing a polished rhyming book involves more work time and creative thinking than prose books.
Why don't you offer revisions in your gig price?
I do my very best work the first time by injecting my professional experience and writing ability into the story you send. What I send back to authors is theirs to use as is, or as a springboard to take their idea to the next level. I will make small revisions when requested.
What help do you offer for illustrations?
For an additional $25, I offer specific illustration suggestions for your book and insights into working with an illustrator and getting your book ready for publishing... I learned all this the hard way as I worked to bring my book to publication.
Will you trim the word count if requested?
Part of my service is to trim filler words and content that tells rather than shows, condense repetitive content, and remove what isn't necessary to creating a great experience for young readers and even their parents. This work automatically reduces the word count.
Do you edit rhyming books?
Yes! I specialize in rhyming manuscripts with a keen ear for rhythm, cadence, meter, and line beats. Whether you're working in couplets, quatrains, or free verse, I'll help ensure your rhyme scheme flows naturally and supports the story's emotional tone.
Can you help with pacing and page turns?
Definitely. Picture books rely heavily on timing and layout. I can improve pacing, tension, and page-turn impact--so your story unfolds in a way that keeps young readers engaged.
What age range do you specialize in?
I work with picture books aimed at toddlers through early readers (ages 0-8). But I have also edited many chapter books and early reading books.
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S sdcinnovate
Repeat Client

United States
Cindy was an incredible help in editing Teresa and Friend Ful’s book. She brought thoughtful insight and asked important questions that helped strengthen the story and make readers think deeper about the characters and their experiences. Some of her feedback really stood out, such as asking whether...
$400-$600
Price
10 days
Duration
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Helpful?J jackiereinig

United States
Cindy demonstrated impressive speed and professionalism throughout the process. Her timely communication and informative updates made a significant difference, and she delivered excellent results that were well worth the investment. Her input was spot on and very helpful to someone who needs a lot of help.
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration

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hydrowave
Repeat Client

United States
Working with Cindy for the second time has been a total game-changer for my children's book projects. She has an incredible grasp of the Southwestern vibe and the specific geography of my town, which is vital for the authenticity of my brand. Cindy provided exactly what I was looking for: a tight, emotional...
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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drannisemabry
Repeat Client

United States
Cindy delivered an exceptional editing experience from start to finish. Her work on my latest chapter was not only thorough, but deeply intentional. She did more than correct grammar or structure. She elevated the clarity, strengthened the flow, and preserved the integrity of my voice in a way that felt...
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
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Helpful?E emily_pann

United States
Cindy delivered exactly what I asked, made the story flow much better overall, and kept the voice and intent in tact. She was great to work with, and delivered everything right on time. I highly recommend working with Cindy! She was fantastic!
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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263 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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S sdcinnovate
Repeat Client

United States
Cindy was an incredible help in editing Teresa and Friend Ful’s book. She brought thoughtful insight and asked important questions that helped strengthen the story and make readers think deeper about the characters and their experiences. Some of her feedback really stood out, such as asking whether...
$400-$600
Price
10 days
Duration
C 
Seller's Response
Helpful?J jackiereinig

United States
Cindy demonstrated impressive speed and professionalism throughout the process. Her timely communication and informative updates made a significant difference, and she delivered excellent results that were well worth the investment. Her input was spot on and very helpful to someone who needs a lot of help.
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration

C 
Seller's Response
Helpful?H 
hydrowave
Repeat Client

United States
Working with Cindy for the second time has been a total game-changer for my children's book projects. She has an incredible grasp of the Southwestern vibe and the specific geography of my town, which is vital for the authenticity of my brand. Cindy provided exactly what I was looking for: a tight, emotional...
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
C 
Seller's Response
Helpful?D 
drannisemabry
Repeat Client

United States
Cindy delivered an exceptional editing experience from start to finish. Her work on my latest chapter was not only thorough, but deeply intentional. She did more than correct grammar or structure. She elevated the clarity, strengthened the flow, and preserved the integrity of my voice in a way that felt...
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
C 
Seller's Response
Helpful?E emily_pann

United States
Cindy delivered exactly what I asked, made the story flow much better overall, and kept the voice and intent in tact. She was great to work with, and delivered everything right on time. I highly recommend working with Cindy! She was fantastic!
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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