I will developmental edit and line edit your fantasy, sci fi, romance, litrpg, ya novel

United States

I speak English, French, German

5 orders completed

Professional Book Editor Polished, Publication, Ready Books

Hi, I'm Everett Cole, a professional Book Editor dedicated to helping authors turn manuscripts into polished, publication-ready books. Whether you've written fiction or nonfiction, I refine grammar, c...
About this Gig

Your fantasy, romance, LitRPG, sci-fi, or YA novel has a great concept, but the plot drifts, pacing slows, character arcs weaken, or the prose lacks impact. As a professional developmental editor and line editor, I'll strengthen your story before you query agents or publish.


I specialize in editing epic fantasy, sword and sorcery, progression fantasy, LitRPG, space opera, military sci-fi, YA fantasy, YA dystopian fiction, romance, and science fiction novels. Every edit preserves your unique voice while improving structure, clarity, pacing, dialogue, character development, and reader immersion.


Here's what you can expect:

  •  Stronger storytelling with actionable developmental editing
  • Professional line editing for stronger prose
  • Better pacing, plot structure, and character arcs
  • Richer worldbuilding for fantasy and LitRPG novels
  • More engaging dialogue and immersive scenes


You'll receive tracked changes, in-document comments, and a detailed editorial report with practical recommendations. If your manuscript also needs a final polish, I can provide proofreading after the editing stage.


Send me a message today, and let's bring your novel to its full potential.

Language:

English

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French

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German

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Spanish

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Children’s books

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Horror/ thriller

Audience :

General readers

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Children

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Teen / young adult

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Adult

POV:

First person

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Third person limited

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Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

Voice:

Active

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