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I will provide detailed beta reading and manuscript feedback

Colleen R

United States

I speak English

148 orders completed

Colleen Riordan is a developmental editor and website designer. She works with authors of Adult, YA, MG, and PB fiction and nonfiction to strengthen their books' plot, pacing, themes, and characteriza...
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Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

Highly Responsive

Known for exceptionally quick replies

About this Gig

Want thoughtful, actionable feedback on your manuscript? Let's make your story shine!


As your dedicated beta reader, I provide detailed, honest feedback through:

  • Inline comments capturing real-time reader reactions
  • Comprehensive analysis of plot, pacing, and character development
  • Clear insights on dialogue authenticity and world-building
  • Specific suggestions for improvement
  • Reader report (Standard/Premium packages only)


My thorough review covers:

  • Plot consistency and engagement
  • Character development and authenticity
  • Dialogue and pacing
  • World-building and descriptive elements
  • Reader engagement and emotional impact
  • Potential confusion points
  • Overall storytelling effectiveness


I welcome all genres - fiction, nonfiction, short stories, and novels. Please note: While erotica is welcome, I do not read on-page sexual violence.


For manuscripts over 90K words, message me for a custom offer.

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Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

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Fantasy

Language:

English

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