I will playtest your game and write a design feedback report


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About this gig
You need to know why players quit your game, what works well, what to fix first, and exactly how to fix it.
I playtest your game and deliver a structured game design feedback report. I write as I play from a new player's perspective, with my extensive game design background, so you see exactly where your first-time experience loses people - while also focusing on exactly what works well and what needs improvement.
Every game testing report includes:
- What's working and why it works
- Issue-by-issue design feedback, each with a concrete suggested fix
- Your top 3 priorities
- Honest notes on retention, onboarding, difficulty, and UX
Why me?
I have a B.A. in Game Design, shipped titles of my own, 100+ clients, and a 5.0 rating on this gig. I'm confident I can deliver for your project. You can read the reviews to find out what others loved.
I consult for games on PC, Steam, mobile, Roblox, and web at any stage, from prototype to launched. I even dive into GDDs if you're at an early stage of development.
Not sure which package fits? Message me with a short description of your game and I'll point you to the right one.
Get to know Connor
Connor Thorpe, Founder of Pixelrain Studios
Level 1
- FromNorway
- Member sinceOct 2017
- Avg. response time1 hour
- Last delivery1 month
Languages
English, Norwegian Bokmål
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FAQ
Why don't you offer video call instead of document based feedback?
I prefer writing. It also saves my clients time, and can easily be referenced back to whereas a video call won't allow you to save the information as easily.
Why should I pick you over the other freelancers available on Fiverr?
I've helped launch games that now have millions of impressions and downloads. I run a successful game design & marketing agency and frequently help clients improve their games. I also have a degree in game design to back up my knowledge. Check out my feedback, or reach out if you want to learn more!
What's included in the design feedback report?
A structured document (typically 15-25 pages): what's working, issue-by-issue design feedback with suggested fixes, and your top 3 priorities. Real delivered reports are in my gallery.
Which platforms do you playtest on?
PC, Steam, mobile (iOS/Android), Roblox, web, and VR. Any stage from prototype to launched.
Can you playtest an unfinished game or early build?
Yes! Feedback is most valuable before launch, while changes are still cheap to make.
28 reviews for this Gig
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simnlizama

Chile
Fantastic experience from start to finish. Connor went above and beyond what I expected. He carefully analyzed my project, provided thoughtful and honest feedback, and gave me a clear roadmap for moving forward. His recommendations were practical, well explained, and tailored specifically to my game...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?T takuyasugita22

United Kingdom
Exceptional work. Connor delivered a true design-level diagnosis, not a surface-level playtest. He identified critical issues I had missed despite extensive theoretical analysis, and reframed the core design problem at a level I hadn't considered. Delivery was faster than scheduled, and both the written...
$100-$200
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?M 
manashtv

United States
Connor is definitely a great person to go to. I appreciated the details he provided that are very helpful. I recommend him for sure!!
$200-$400
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3 days
Duration
Helpful?C 
comicogames

Germany
Connor did a fantastic job! He provided a thorough review of our game's FTUE with valuable insights and clear priorities for what to focus on first. Brilliant work—highly recommended. We only wish we had found him sooner!
$200-$400
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?O odaniait

Germany
Ongoing collaborationWorking with Connor in game development was an absolute pleasure. His attention to details, professionalism, and thorough documentation made the project seamless. Polite and proactive, Connor's cooperation was top-notch. Thanks for the GREAT work, Connor—looking forward to collaborating on more tasks and ideas! 🙌
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
28 reviews for this Gig
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simnlizama

Chile
Fantastic experience from start to finish. Connor went above and beyond what I expected. He carefully analyzed my project, provided thoughtful and honest feedback, and gave me a clear roadmap for moving forward. His recommendations were practical, well explained, and tailored specifically to my game...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?T takuyasugita22

United Kingdom
Exceptional work. Connor delivered a true design-level diagnosis, not a surface-level playtest. He identified critical issues I had missed despite extensive theoretical analysis, and reframed the core design problem at a level I hadn't considered. Delivery was faster than scheduled, and both the written...
$100-$200
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?M 
manashtv

United States
Connor is definitely a great person to go to. I appreciated the details he provided that are very helpful. I recommend him for sure!!
$200-$400
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?C 
comicogames

Germany
Connor did a fantastic job! He provided a thorough review of our game's FTUE with valuable insights and clear priorities for what to focus on first. Brilliant work—highly recommended. We only wish we had found him sooner!
$200-$400
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?O odaniait

Germany
Ongoing collaborationWorking with Connor in game development was an absolute pleasure. His attention to details, professionalism, and thorough documentation made the project seamless. Polite and proactive, Connor's cooperation was top-notch. Thanks for the GREAT work, Connor—looking forward to collaborating on more tasks and ideas! 🙌
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
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