I will provide beta reading and feedback
USAF Retired just hanging around doing a lot of reading
About this Gig
Hey there, fellow writer! Reviewing the fruits of your hard labor would be my pleasure and honor.
I know that each word you wrote was an expression of your creative or driven self. But as you know, things don't always come across the way you intended when you set out your thoughts. I'd like to offer you a helping hand by taking a hard look from another perspective.
As a writer myself and avid reader, I think I have a good sense of what makes a compelling or convincing read. I don't want to brag, but I did win the award for most Accelerated Reader points in 8th grade, and I think that speaks for itself.
I'll keep an eye out for:
-Plot Holes: Whoopsie...
-Pacing: Because sometimes we rush it, or take a little too much pleasure in the details.
-Characters: Are they likable or detestable, believable or hollow?
-Overall Impression: Am I interested, bored, excited, informed...am I feeling how you want me to about it?
What you will get back:
-A friendly, detailed report breaking down my overall thoughts.
-Total respect and appreciation for your creative vision.
-The thoughtful feedback of a real reader combined with the insights of an educated reader and writer.
Language:
English
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FAQ
Who are you anyway?
I am a lifelong reader, athlete, learner and husband. I served 20 years in the Air Force and retired in 2025. I am a lifelong learner, especially about health, fitness, history and science. I've run ultramarathons, lifted weights (a recent development) and love British mysteries and library talks.
