I will beta read the first three chapters of your novel

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English, Spanish

2 orders completed

In 2017, my wife and I moved to Philadelphia, a small town compared to my home of sixteen years, New York City. With a focus on my first novel, I wound up writing three. I'm currently pitching a sci-f...
About this Gig

As you may or may not know, the first three chapters of your book are the most important. This is how much time most readers, agents, and publishers will give you to hook them. Some may not even get past the first chapter or first sentence.

 

Why? Maybe your main character isn't compelling enough, or you haven't set up the inciting incident. Maybe you're head-hopping, using massive amounts of exposition, or giving us huge chunks of dialog. 

 

Why pay for a beta read of your entire book when the most common mistakes are made early on and will be repeated throughout your manuscript? Whether you're just beginning your first novel or want feedback before sending your sample pages out to a literary agent, let me help you.

 

As an author of four novels (some being pitched to agents and some being reworked), I'm constantly writing, learning, reading, and helping others in my writing circle. When it comes to beta reads, I take an unorthodox approach. Every writer is different and I treat every project that way. I want to provide you with constructive criticism, but more importantly, motivate you toward the finish line of what can feel like a marathon.

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Other

Language:

English

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    christomaze

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    Super quick. Super skilled. This seller pinpointed specific issues with my first three chapters and offered me actionable steps to improve them. Nice working with them.

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    jomobenun

    US

    United States

    5

    Danny provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book. He was friendly, communicative, and delivered the next day. Pleasure working with you, Danny!

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2 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Recommend to a friend
    5
  • Service as described
    5
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Most relevant
  • C

    christomaze

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Super quick. Super skilled. This seller pinpointed specific issues with my first three chapters and offered me actionable steps to improve them. Nice working with them.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J
    image-docs

    jomobenun

    US

    United States

    5

    Danny provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book. He was friendly, communicative, and delivered the next day. Pleasure working with you, Danny!

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No