I will provide professional and detailed coverage of your script
Screenwriter, author, and editor with an excellent eye for detail
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
Are you a screenwriter looking for honest, professional feedback to take your script to the next level?
As both a writer and editor with a strong storytelling background, I offer clear, constructive, and actionable screenplay coverage just like what you'd receive from a production company, contest judge, or development executive.
What you'll receive:
- A 5-page coverage report (PDF)
- A concise logline and summary
- Detailed analysis of structure, character, dialogue, theme, and pacing
- Tailored suggestions for your next revision
- Score sheet highlighting strengths and weaknesses of individual elements
This service is ideal for:
- Feature-length screenplays
- TV pilots
- Short films
- Contest submissions
- Early drafts needing direction
Having studied screenwriting at university, and going on to write three feature-length screenplays and authoring one novel, I know what it takes to get your story out there. I have over 10 years of freelance writing and editing experience of fiction and non-fiction books, as well as TV and feature-length screenplays. I have a passion for storytelling and know how to guide a script without rewriting it, to ensure your voice remains at the heart of it.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
How does the scoring work?
I use a five point scoring system to determine the strengths and weaknesses of the script. Breaking it down into five categories; Concept, Plot, Characters, Dialogue, Theme, allows the writer to see where their work is falling short or excelling.
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M magnuslyche1

United Kingdom
A huge thank you to Danny for his in-depth review. It really helped me get a solid understanding of what was working and what wasn't with my script. Feedback was concise and well laid out and sets me up perfectly for the next stage. I'd 100% recommend Danny to any script writer and will definitely go to him in the future.
$100-$200
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?D dafilmguy109

United States
The seller delivered professional coverage that I can used to make the project better.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?R rochelle_m_h

United Kingdom
Just what I needed after the first draft!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?P 
proscriptfix
Repeat Client

United States
Danny did an excellent job with my pilot notes. Delivery was on time; his comments were insightful and very much on target. I look forward to working with him again. Highly recommend that you work with him if you need fresh eyes on your work!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?P 
proscriptfix
Repeat Client

United States
Excellent feedback that totally confirmed the concerns I had going in - very much on target with useful feedback. THANK YOU!!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?
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M magnuslyche1

United Kingdom
A huge thank you to Danny for his in-depth review. It really helped me get a solid understanding of what was working and what wasn't with my script. Feedback was concise and well laid out and sets me up perfectly for the next stage. I'd 100% recommend Danny to any script writer and will definitely go to him in the future.
$100-$200
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?D dafilmguy109

United States
The seller delivered professional coverage that I can used to make the project better.
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?R rochelle_m_h

United Kingdom
Just what I needed after the first draft!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?P 
proscriptfix
Repeat Client

United States
Danny did an excellent job with my pilot notes. Delivery was on time; his comments were insightful and very much on target. I look forward to working with him again. Highly recommend that you work with him if you need fresh eyes on your work!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?P 
proscriptfix
Repeat Client

United States
Excellent feedback that totally confirmed the concerns I had going in - very much on target with useful feedback. THANK YOU!!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?
