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I will write script coverage notes and feedback on your screenplay
Professional Screenwriter and Script Consultant
I'm a writer and writing coach passionate about collaborating with fellow creatives worldwide.
With over a decade of experience and a Master of Arts in Screenwriting, I’ve written multiple feature an...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
Struggling to take your script to the next level? Writing can feel like a solitary pursuit, but it doesn't have to be. Just book a gig, grab a cappuccino, and let me dive into your script while you take a break.
With 15+ years in the film industry, an M.A. in Screenwriting, the Academy's Oscar® for Best Student Film, BAFTA Finalist honors, 1,000+ festival screenings, and jury assignments at international festivals, I know what makes stories resonate and scripts stand out.
Here's what I offer:
- Detailed, constructive notes (among the most thorough on Fiverr)
- At least eight pages of feedback (often much more), far beyond standard coverage gigs
- A deep dive into plot, character, pacing, structure, dialogue, and more
- Honest, balanced analysis that highlights strengths and areas for growth
- Clear, actionable tips you can apply immediately
- A collaborative, supportive approach that respects your vision
- Optional ongoing support as your coach or accountability partner
Writers I've worked with have gone on to win competitions and land producers. I'd love to help you take the next step, too.
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English
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German
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65 reviews for this Gig
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N ntolmachoff
United States
David absolutely gave his all on giving me notes and I will definitely be implementing them I look forward to working with him again
Up to $50
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2 days
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Helpful?A alphzys
United Kingdom
David was exceptional. He read everything thoroughly and understood all the subtleties I was aiming for. His analysis and feedback were top-notch. I genuinely enjoyed reading his responses, he gave me several new ideas on what I could add and also helped fix issues with grammar and formatting. Five...
$50-$100
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8 days
Duration
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Helpful?A action_chad
Repeat Client
United States
I’ve worked with David, over a few passes, on this script enough to definitely say that he is a true artist and professional. He has understated his ability to address deficiencies and give thoughtful, proactive and actionable notes. I couldn’t be more pleased with every interaction.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
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Helpful?L lancerevoir
Repeat Client
United States
Fantastic insight and notes! He was extremely thorough. He went above and beyond with the number of notes. You can tell he actually read the whole thing thoroughly.
$50-$100
Price
12 days
Duration
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Helpful?A action_chad
Repeat Client
United States
David is a true professional. His clear concise commentary demonstrate his command of creativity and craft. This is his second look at a script I’m getting ready for festival season. It has gotten infinitely better with his ideas and suggestions. I’m excited about being able to work with him in the future.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
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65 reviews for this Gig
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N ntolmachoff
United States
David absolutely gave his all on giving me notes and I will definitely be implementing them I look forward to working with him again
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
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Helpful?A alphzys
United Kingdom
David was exceptional. He read everything thoroughly and understood all the subtleties I was aiming for. His analysis and feedback were top-notch. I genuinely enjoyed reading his responses, he gave me several new ideas on what I could add and also helped fix issues with grammar and formatting. Five...
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
D Seller's Response
Helpful?A action_chad
Repeat Client
United States
I’ve worked with David, over a few passes, on this script enough to definitely say that he is a true artist and professional. He has understated his ability to address deficiencies and give thoughtful, proactive and actionable notes. I couldn’t be more pleased with every interaction.
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
D Seller's Response
Helpful?L lancerevoir
Repeat Client
United States
Fantastic insight and notes! He was extremely thorough. He went above and beyond with the number of notes. You can tell he actually read the whole thing thoroughly.
$50-$100
Price
12 days
Duration
D Seller's Response
Helpful?A action_chad
Repeat Client
United States
David is a true professional. His clear concise commentary demonstrate his command of creativity and craft. This is his second look at a script I’m getting ready for festival season. It has gotten infinitely better with his ideas and suggestions. I’m excited about being able to work with him in the future.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
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