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I will write script coverage notes and feedback on your screenplay
Gig Summary
Professional Screenwriter and Script Consultant
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
Struggling to take your script to the next level? Writing can feel like a solitary pursuit, but it doesn't have to be. Just book a gig, grab a cappuccino, and let me dive into your script while you take a break.
With 15+ years in the film industry, an M.A. in Screenwriting, the Academy's Oscar® for Best Student Film, BAFTA Finalist honors, 1,000+ festival screenings, and jury assignments at international festivals, I know what makes stories resonate and scripts stand out.
Here's what I offer:
- Detailed, constructive notes (among the most thorough on Fiverr)
- At least eight pages of feedback (often much more), far beyond standard coverage gigs
- A deep dive into plot, character, pacing, structure, dialogue, and more
- Honest, balanced analysis that highlights strengths and areas for growth
- Clear, actionable tips you can apply immediately
- A collaborative, supportive approach that respects your vision
- Optional ongoing support as your coach or accountability partner
Writers I've worked with have gone on to win competitions and land producers. I'd love to help you take the next step, too.
CHOOSE A PACKAGE OR MESSAGE ME FOR A CUSTOM GIG NOW :-)
Language:
English
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German
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70 reviews for this Gig
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abrahamdavid00

Canada
Ongoing collaborationDavid's turnaround was very quick and his feedback careful and thorough.
$50
Price
7 days
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Helpful?J joegray33

United States
I submitted a pilot episode script I wrote that I’ve been struggling to get insightful notes on from my personal network so I booked David and was blown away from his work. His notes gave me actionable changes to make that make sense. Will definitely be booking again
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?A ayeteabee

United States
David is the real deal. I can easily tell that he took the time to dig deep into my script, paying close attention to the fine details. Great actionable feedback and very complimentary on the things that are working. I would employ his services again.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?W wbate661

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationDetailed, lengthy, eloquent feedback on the concept and page-by-page notes. David proceeded with a hugely helpful conversation of what I wanted to do, what the script wasn't yet achieving, and his ideas on how to get there.
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?N ntolmachoff

United States
David absolutely gave his all on giving me notes and I will definitely be implementing them I look forward to working with him again
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?
70 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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abrahamdavid00

Canada
Ongoing collaborationDavid's turnaround was very quick and his feedback careful and thorough.
$50
Price
7 days
Duration
D 
Seller's Response
Helpful?J joegray33

United States
I submitted a pilot episode script I wrote that I’ve been struggling to get insightful notes on from my personal network so I booked David and was blown away from his work. His notes gave me actionable changes to make that make sense. Will definitely be booking again
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
D 
Seller's Response
Helpful?A ayeteabee

United States
David is the real deal. I can easily tell that he took the time to dig deep into my script, paying close attention to the fine details. Great actionable feedback and very complimentary on the things that are working. I would employ his services again.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
D 
Seller's Response
Helpful?W wbate661

United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationDetailed, lengthy, eloquent feedback on the concept and page-by-page notes. David proceeded with a hugely helpful conversation of what I wanted to do, what the script wasn't yet achieving, and his ideas on how to get there.
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
D 
Seller's Response
Helpful?N ntolmachoff

United States
David absolutely gave his all on giving me notes and I will definitely be implementing them I look forward to working with him again
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
D 
Seller's Response
Helpful?

