I will be your beta reader, romance beta reader, beta reader fantasy, alpha beta reader

United States

I speak English, French, Spanish, German

Professional Beta reader

I read your draft like an editor and feel it like a reader I'm Deborah. Writers send me the drafts they haven't shown anyone else yet. After years of doing this, that never gets old. As a beta reader...
About this Gig

Orders are open! Kindly DM me, and I will send you my report structure!


NO AI USED! 100%-vetted, detailed structural analysis!


I am a passionate reader with experience reviewing romance, fantasy, dark romance, thriller, historical fiction, supernatural and erotica stories. I understand what keeps readers engaged, what makes characters memorable, and what elements can weaken a story.


My goal is to offer a genuine reader's perspective, point out inconsistencies, and provide useful suggestions that can help strengthen your manuscript before publication.


My feedback covers:

  • Plot and Story Development
  • Pacing and Flow
  • Readability
  • Character Growth and Development
  • Emotional Connection
  • Romance Elements and Chemistry
  • Fantasy World-Building
  • Plot Holes and Story Inconsistencies (with suggestions)
  • Overall Reading Experience


What you will receive:

  • A detailed and well-organised feedback report (PDF)
  • Honest reader insights and reactions
  • A breakdown of strengths and areas for improvement
  • Helpful recommendations to enhance your manuscript


Honest, constructive, and reader-focused feedback to help improve your manuscript and make your story stronger.


Let's make your story shine.

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Horror/ thriller

Romance

Fantasy

Language:

English

French

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