I will be your beta reader, romance beta reader, beta reader fantasy, alpha beta reader
About this Gig
Orders are open! Kindly DM me, and I will send you my report structure!
NO AI USED! 100%-vetted, detailed structural analysis!
I am a passionate reader with experience reviewing romance, fantasy, dark romance, thriller, historical fiction, supernatural and erotica stories. I understand what keeps readers engaged, what makes characters memorable, and what elements can weaken a story.
My goal is to offer a genuine reader's perspective, point out inconsistencies, and provide useful suggestions that can help strengthen your manuscript before publication.
My feedback covers:
- Plot and Story Development
- Pacing and Flow
- Readability
- Character Growth and Development
- Emotional Connection
- Romance Elements and Chemistry
- Fantasy World-Building
- Plot Holes and Story Inconsistencies (with suggestions)
- Overall Reading Experience
What you will receive:
- A detailed and well-organised feedback report (PDF)
- Honest reader insights and reactions
- A breakdown of strengths and areas for improvement
- Helpful recommendations to enhance your manuscript
Honest, constructive, and reader-focused feedback to help improve your manuscript and make your story stronger.
Let's make your story shine.
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Which format shoud I send my manuscript?
Preferably Word or PDF, but I accept other formats too.
Do you write in-line comments?
Unfortunately, I don’t work with in-line commentary anymore. I provide the in-depth analysis by writing you a report.
What is the length of the report I will receive?
It depends on the length of your manuscript. But here’s a simplified preview: - Simple package (up to 5,000 words manuscripts): around 4-5 pages - Intermediate package: (up to 50,000 words manuscripts) around 6-7 pages - Premium package (up to 100,00
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Absolutely! I will not share, by any means, your manuscript with anyone.

