I will provide substantive developmental or line editing
Professional writer, editor, researcher
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f_hays33

United States
Received a very concise and clear analysis of my writing, noting many areas in which I could improve which is exactly what I sought him out for.
jenfrytalks

United States
This is my 2nd book working with Danny and I will be back for the 3rd one to work with him. He does such great work. He is very dilligent in learning your voice...
iarene

United States
Daniel came to me highly recommended. He has exceeded my expectations in every way. And has elevated my project to potential best seller status. I will gladly use him again for all future projects.
ogochukwubossai

United States
Danny provided very detailed notes that were very helpful in improving the quality of my work and I am very grateful for this. Thank you again for working with me.
About this Gig
*Please contact me for quotes on longer texts.*
Want to give your writing a boost? Looking for substantive suggestions on how to help your text shine? Send your work to me! I offer two kinds of editing services: developmental editing and line editing.
For developmental editing, I will carefully read your book, short story, or article and provide inline commentary with suggestions for rewrites along with a detailed, constructive critique addressing structure, voice, reader engagement, language use, and anything else I find that may help you develop your work to its potential. This service includes inline commentary and a separate editorial report (but not changes to the document).
For line editing, l will directly modify your text to assist with style, flow, and clarity of your work. Where appropriate, I'll add content such as transitions or limited amounts of exposition. (I'll also address grammatical issues as I find them.)
I have extensive experience with both fiction and nonfiction of all genres. Please contact me before ordering so we can work out which service is the right one to help you reach your goals. I look forward to hearing from you!
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Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
What kind of editing does this gig include?
I actually offer two different services through this gig: Developmental Editing and Line Editing. Before starting any job, please let me know which service you're interested in.
What is Developmental Editing?
A detailed critique of your work. It includes inline commentary on structure, style, and language, as well as a separate editorial report with holistic recommendations. I'll highlight what's working, what's not, and offer suggestions for you to consider as appropriate.
What is Line Editing?
This is where I make actual edits to the text, working to improve style, flow, and clarity. I'll add transitional language as needed (within reason), break up or rearrange paragraphs to improve flow, etc. I'll also correct grammar errors as I find them, but this isn't a proofreading service.
What I'm not sure what I need?
Contact me and let me know what your goals are at present for your draft. If you think you may need both services, developmental editing would normally come first. Sometimes for shorter texts it's possible to do both services simultaneously.
702 reviews for this Gig
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mmg0802

United States
Order Canceled
Very disappointing experience. Communication was virtually nonexistent throughout the entire project. I waited nearly two weeks for updates, repeatedly followed up, and received little to no response. Deadlines came and went without explanation, leaving me uncertain about the status of the work. If timely...
$400-$600
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?F f_hays33

United States
Received a very concise and clear analysis of my writing, noting many areas in which I could improve which is exactly what I sought him out for.
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?J jenfrytalks
Repeat Client

United States
This is my 2nd book working with Danny and I will be back for the 3rd one to work with him. He does such great work. He is very dilligent in learning your voice when editing and not just using his own voice. If you are looking for an editor this is a person you must work with.
$800-$1,000
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?I iarene
Repeat Client

United States
Daniel came to me highly recommended. He has exceeded my expectations in every way. And has elevated my project to potential best seller status. I will gladly use him again for all future projects.
$400-$600
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?O 
ogochukwubossai

United States
Danny provided very detailed notes that were very helpful in improving the quality of my work and I am very grateful for this. Thank you again for working with me.
$100-$200
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?
702 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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mmg0802

United States
Order Canceled
Very disappointing experience. Communication was virtually nonexistent throughout the entire project. I waited nearly two weeks for updates, repeatedly followed up, and received little to no response. Deadlines came and went without explanation, leaving me uncertain about the status of the work. If timely...
$400-$600
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?F f_hays33

United States
Received a very concise and clear analysis of my writing, noting many areas in which I could improve which is exactly what I sought him out for.
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?J jenfrytalks
Repeat Client

United States
This is my 2nd book working with Danny and I will be back for the 3rd one to work with him. He does such great work. He is very dilligent in learning your voice when editing and not just using his own voice. If you are looking for an editor this is a person you must work with.
$800-$1,000
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?I iarene
Repeat Client

United States
Daniel came to me highly recommended. He has exceeded my expectations in every way. And has elevated my project to potential best seller status. I will gladly use him again for all future projects.
$400-$600
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?O 
ogochukwubossai

United States
Danny provided very detailed notes that were very helpful in improving the quality of my work and I am very grateful for this. Thank you again for working with me.
$100-$200
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?
