I will expertly developmental book edit your novel or manuscript

United Kingdom

I speak Spanish

BOOK EDITOR PROOFREADER AND FORMATTER

Hello I'm Mary, a professional writer, editor, and self-published author with over many years of experience in content creation, eBook publishing, and digital storytelling. I hold a Master of Arts (MA...
About this Gig

Developmental Editing for Novels, Manuscripts & Short Stories


All editing is done 100% by me no AI, ever.

Looking for a developmental editor to turn your novel or manuscript into a story readers can't put down? A developmental edit focuses on the big-picture elements of your fiction not grammar, but the heart of the story itself.


What I work on:

  • The emotional throughline and central theme of your story
  • Core storytelling elements your hook, premise, cast of characters, structure, and pacing
  • World-building that feels immersive and true to itself
  • Craft-level issues, including POV slips like head-hopping
  • Using familiar tropes in ways that still feel surprising and original


What you'll receive:

  • Comments directly in your manuscript
  • A full editorial report breaking down my findings
  • A one-hour one-on-one conversation to talk it through


All feedback comes from a place of encouragement I want to help your story get stronger, not tear it down.


I'm open to working on any genre, no judgment ever though my strongest background is in Historical Fiction, Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Romance, Suspense, and Mystery.


Send me your word count and genre for a quick, friendly quote!

Language:

English

Spanish

Genre:

Memoir/ biography

Motivational

Mystery

Audience :

General readers

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Other

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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