I will expertly developmental book edit your novel or manuscript
About this Gig
Developmental Editing for Novels, Manuscripts & Short Stories
All editing is done 100% by me no AI, ever.
Looking for a developmental editor to turn your novel or manuscript into a story readers can't put down? A developmental edit focuses on the big-picture elements of your fiction not grammar, but the heart of the story itself.
What I work on:
- The emotional throughline and central theme of your story
- Core storytelling elements your hook, premise, cast of characters, structure, and pacing
- World-building that feels immersive and true to itself
- Craft-level issues, including POV slips like head-hopping
- Using familiar tropes in ways that still feel surprising and original
What you'll receive:
- Comments directly in your manuscript
- A full editorial report breaking down my findings
- A one-hour one-on-one conversation to talk it through
All feedback comes from a place of encouragement I want to help your story get stronger, not tear it down.
I'm open to working on any genre, no judgment ever though my strongest background is in Historical Fiction, Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Romance, Suspense, and Mystery.
Send me your word count and genre for a quick, friendly quote!
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FAQ
What is a developmental edit, exactly?
A developmental edit looks at the big picture of your story—theme, structure, pacing, characters, and world-building. It's not a line edit or proofread, so grammar and typos aren't the focus here.
Do you use AI at any point in the editing process?
No. Every read-through, comment, and report is done by me, personally—no AI tools involved.
How long does it take to get my edit back?
Turnaround depends on word count and my current queue. I'll give you a clear delivery date before we start, and I'll flag it early if anything changes.
What genres do you work with?
Any genre—I'm non-judgmental about content or subject matter. My deepest experience is in Historical Fiction, Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Romance, Suspense, and Mystery, but I welcome other genres too.
Is this a good fit for a first draft?
Yes, and it's often the ideal stage for a developmental edit, this pass is meant to happen before you polish sentence-level details, so you're not fixing prose that might get cut or rewritten later.
Do you offer a sample edit before I commit?
Message me with your word count and genre, and I'm happy to discuss options, including a short sample if it helps you decide.

