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I will edit an lgbtq fiction book
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
About this Gig
Every novel needs an editor to make the finished product the best it can be. That is where editors step in and work alongside the author to help the author make their work shine.
I will edit anything from short stories to novellas and novels all from an LGBT perspective. I can also provide copyediting and proofreading services.
A Developmental Edit from me includes:
A full report as well as comments in the manuscript tracker. The report will cover areas of your manuscript including:
Plot
Characters
POV
Plausability
Plot holes and consistency
Readability
I also love to identify strong points and help authors make those strengths even stronger.
A Line Edit from me includes:
Inline comments on your manuscript with suggestions on how to fix problem areas. I will also include a report with general feedback.
Please message me before you purchase to make sure were a good fit and to let me know if you want a developmental edit or line edit.
Feel free to ask about a custom package to best suit your needs.
Language:
English
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
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Romance
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Sports
Style guide:
Other
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Will you offer a custom package to best suit my needs?
Absolutely! In fact, most of my clients ask for a custom package.
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6 reviews for this Gig
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T terrycyr
United States
Was looking for help with developmental editing on a story, there wasn't much actionable feedback. Offered general suggestions, but no specific details on how to achieve it which I presumed would come with developmental editing. Got back more of a generalized beta read response.
$200-$400
Price
5 weeks
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?B 
bradjagger
United States
I’ve now worked with Derek twice, and I can say without hesitation that he is exceptional at what he does. His developmental edit on The Road to Gaza was thoughtful, detailed, and incredibly insightful. He didn’t just point out surface-level issues — he pushed deeper into narrative structure, character...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?B bradjagger
United States
Derek provided an excellent developmental edit for my novel The Gates of Jerusalem. His feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and extremely helpful—especially regarding pacing, POV clarity, and strengthening relationship dynamics. He didn’t just point out issues; he explained why they mattered and offered...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A 
adam_lawrence85
United States
I loved working with Derek! All of his edits and notes were thoughtful, caring and showed that he had taken his time to read and understand my book. He went above and beyond with communication before, during and after- making sure I was satisfied every step of the way. My book is better for his involvement and I will be using him again in the future!
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?G grummandriver
New Zealand
Derek C gave me insights into my book that will help me polish it to a higher lustre. He pointed out areas that were not as strong as they could have been but also praised areas that were well done. He understood the genre and gave perceptive comments about areas that should be modified.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
6 reviews for this Gig
| (5) | ||
| (0) | ||
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| (0) | ||
| (1) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
T terrycyr
United States
Was looking for help with developmental editing on a story, there wasn't much actionable feedback. Offered general suggestions, but no specific details on how to achieve it which I presumed would come with developmental editing. Got back more of a generalized beta read response.
$200-$400
Price
5 weeks
Duration
D Seller's Response
Helpful?B bradjagger
United States
I’ve now worked with Derek twice, and I can say without hesitation that he is exceptional at what he does. His developmental edit on The Road to Gaza was thoughtful, detailed, and incredibly insightful. He didn’t just point out surface-level issues — he pushed deeper into narrative structure, character...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?B bradjagger
United States
Derek provided an excellent developmental edit for my novel The Gates of Jerusalem. His feedback was thoughtful, detailed, and extremely helpful—especially regarding pacing, POV clarity, and strengthening relationship dynamics. He didn’t just point out issues; he explained why they mattered and offered...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A adam_lawrence85
United States
I loved working with Derek! All of his edits and notes were thoughtful, caring and showed that he had taken his time to read and understand my book. He went above and beyond with communication before, during and after- making sure I was satisfied every step of the way. My book is better for his involvement and I will be using him again in the future!
$50-$100
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?G grummandriver
New Zealand
Derek C gave me insights into my book that will help me polish it to a higher lustre. He pointed out areas that were not as strong as they could have been but also praised areas that were well done. He understood the genre and gave perceptive comments about areas that should be modified.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
