I will consult, develop or write your screenplay

We have to remember that our first audience is going to be the READER and not people in a crowded theater or festival so it makes sense to make it a joy for the reader first and foremost. 

I have gotten a lot of coverage on my own work over the years and a lot of the time I was left frustrated because every reader is different with different ideas of what is good writing. You tailor your script for that reader then another reader comes along and provides an entirely different level of analysis completely irrelevant to the previous reader.  

I will provide criticism on the most objective level possible. What is your story and how do you want to accomplish it? I won't be providing "I like" or "I want" criticism rather things like What is your theme? Does your character have an arc and does it work?

I can also provide consulting to help you refine: 

• Story Ideas
• Dialogue
• Structure
• Theme
• Action/Description
• Characters
• And More

Feel free to send me a message before you order. I am also open to authoring a new draft for you if that is what you need. I am a slower writer and have other obligations so a new draft will take at least a month if not more, possibly less if I have the time.