I will be your young adult fiction beta reader with honest feedback
About this Gig
I will beta read your young adult fiction manuscript and provide honest feedback on pacing, characters, dialogue, and reader engagement.
Are you writing the next must-read YA novel? Whether your story is a dystopian thriller, coming-of-age romance, or school drama with a twist, I'll provide honest, detailed, and reader-savvy feedback tailored for the Young Adult market.
With a background in ghostwriting and beta reading across multiple fiction genres, including romance, fantasy, and urban lit, I understand what makes a young adult story compelling, fresh, and emotionally grounded.
I don't just read your work, I assess your characters, pacing, dialogue, plot structure, and whether your story hits with its intended audience.
What's Included:
- Constructive, in-line comments (as needed)
- Summary feedback on strengths & improvement areas
- Notes on pacing, flow, character believability, and emotional pull
- Honest impressions from a reader's lens with editorial insight
- YA tone consistency + genre clarity
Services Offered:
- Novellas
- Novels
Genres Offered:
- Romantic Comedy
- Coming of Age
- Drama
- Fantasy
- Sci-fi
- Suspense
- Thriller
What I Don't Offer:
- Nonfiction or memoirs
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you offer add-ons with your gigs?
Yes, I offer the following (recommended) add-ons: character development, structural analysis, reader engagement, dialogue evaluation, and cultural sensitivity. There is also a rush delivery add-on. Please refer to the order page for more details or DM for pricing.
Do you accept drafts that aren't completed?
Yes, however, I ask that your WIP (work in progress) be cohesive, coherent, and readable (relatively free of grammatical errors). If the manuscript provided doesn't meet these standards, your order will be canceled.
What if I don't like the feedback given? Can I get a refund?
Advice is subjective so you aren't inclined to take suggestions or agree with advice given. However, if you wish for your book to be successful, being open to constructive feedback is best. Once the service has been completed and the sale accepted, it is final (or you may reach out to support).
What formats do you accept for my manuscript?
I accept the following: Word Doc, Google Doc, PDF, or any other equivalent document that can be easily accessed. If you have your draft stored in your phone please copy and paste it into one of the aforementioned processors and format it correctly. Poor formats will be rejected and canceled.
If I need a revision, what can I expect?
If you need clarity on my feedback or would like me to elaborate further on a specific point, I will do that for you. However, I will not start the order from scratch or provide details on an aspect that hasn't been purchased.
What feedback can I expect once you read my work?
If you're purchasing a basic, standard, or premium gig without an add-on, the feedback given is only for an overall view of initial thoughts about the story and characters. If you want specific feedback please review and select the specific services on the add-on page before completing your order.
How long can I expect my reader report to be?
Each reader report can vary depending on what you order. However, the feedback will be thorough and valuable.
Do you do zoom calls, phone calls or text?
No. All communication is done through Fiverr messages only.

