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I will improve your college admissions essay or personal statement
Daniel
Level 2
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About this gig
While the college admissions personal statement may seem daunting, it doesn't have to be. As an Ivy League student at the University of Pennsylvania, I can offer what few others can: first-hand knowledge of what college application essays need to be to obtain admissions to the best universities.
In the past, I have helped students successfully receive admission to Northwestern, Berkeley, Vanderbilt, UPenn, NYU, and full rides to Wesleyan. I guarantee to improve your writing and ensure that your application is a showpiece to help attend your dream university.
My up to date knowledge of what top-tier universities want from a college admissions essay will ensure that your personal statement will standout and fully encapsulate your story and your goals. We will work together to edit and proofread your college application essay to give you the best chance of admission!
Let me help you craft your personal statement to tell the best story possible. Please message me with any questions or for writing samples!
Note that I will never write a college admissions essay for you -- I will only provide edits to help you receive admissions to your dream university.
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Get to know Daniel
Daniel
Storyteller : UPenn Grad : Former White House
Level 2
- FromUnited States
- Member sinceMay 2021
- Avg. response time1 hour
- Last delivery2 weeks
Languages
English, French
Hi, I'm Daniel, a graduate from the University of Pennsylvania and former White House Press intern. My years of experience editing admissions essays and first-hand knowledge of what top schools look for have sharpened my advice and writing skills. I hope to help you as I have helped my previous students who have received admission to Berkeley, UPenn medical school, and Fulbright scholarships. Please do not hesitate to contact me. Let's get to work!
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FAQ
Will you write your essay for me?
No. While I will improve your essay, I will not write it for you. Doing so would be unethical and could damage your future education. I will, however, do everything I can to help you tell the best story possible by significantly editing your essay.
What should I do if I have multiple essays that need editing?
Contact me! If you’re applying to multiple schools and/or one school that requires multiple essays (including a handful of short answer questions) then reach out to me and I’d be more than willing to create a custom package. Please send me a direct message.
What package should I order? I’m unsure which one is best for me.
Please send me a direct message so that I can help you find the package that best matches your needs!
What kind of essays do you edit?
I am happy to edit any kind of personal statement such as undergraduate admissions essays, graduate school essays, cover letters, motivational letters, scholarship essays, and more.
I have a question your gig doesn't answer...
No worries! Send me a message to discuss your requirements.
My essay is over the word limit. Can you help me?
Of course! One of my strengths as a writer is simplifying complex ideas. As an old English teacher of mine said: "Good writing means taking 15 pounds of stuff and putting it into a two pound bag."
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215 reviews for this Gig
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M mp4804
Repeat Client
Italy
Daniel helped me to understand how to write my presentation essay for a graduate program in NYC. I loved his help and his advice, he really changed my approach to writing my essays. I 100% recommend him!
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?G guagua1
Japan
Some of his advice are useful, but overall the edits are almost helpful and mostly just deleting with strong vibes of Artifical Intelligence. Not really recommend if you are hoping for somebody taking efforts helping you with the edits, period.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
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Helpful?A alice_liu366
Repeat Client
United States
Really helpful!
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?N nori533
Japan
Daniel provided clear and constructive feedback on my Activities section. His suggestions helped me strengthen several entries and improve the overall presentation. I appreciated his thoughtful review and support.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?B bbbndd1
United States
Thank you for your help I will definitely come back
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
215 reviews for this Gig
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| (6) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (2) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
M mp4804
Repeat Client
Italy
Daniel helped me to understand how to write my presentation essay for a graduate program in NYC. I loved his help and his advice, he really changed my approach to writing my essays. I 100% recommend him!
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?G guagua1
Japan
Some of his advice are useful, but overall the edits are almost helpful and mostly just deleting with strong vibes of Artifical Intelligence. Not really recommend if you are hoping for somebody taking efforts helping you with the edits, period.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
D Seller's Response
Helpful?A alice_liu366
Repeat Client
United States
Really helpful!
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?N nori533
Japan
Daniel provided clear and constructive feedback on my Activities section. His suggestions helped me strengthen several entries and improve the overall presentation. I appreciated his thoughtful review and support.
Up to $50
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?B bbbndd1
United States
Thank you for your help I will definitely come back
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
