I will review and improve your business proposal
About this Gig
Most business proposals dont fail because of effort.
They fail because they arent clear, structured or commercially convincing.
If youve written a proposal and arent sure it will land, this is where I help.
What I do
I review and improve business proposals so they are clearer, more compelling and decision-ready.
This isnt generic editing.
Its a focused upgrade based on real-world experience (HSBC, EY) and what actually gets decisions over the line.
What you get
- Clear feedback on whats working and what isnt
- Stronger messaging and structure
- Rewritten sections where needed
- Sharper positioning to increase your chances of success
Who this is for
- You already have a draft proposal or pitch
- You want to improve quality before sending
- You need expert input, not just editing
How it works
- You submit your proposal
- I review structure, messaging and positioning
- You receive a refined version or clear improvement guidance
Communication is focused and structured for fast delivery.
Most clients choose the Proposal Upgrade package for the best balance of depth and value.
Select your package to get started
Business type:
Startups
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SMBs
Industry:
Financial services
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Marketing & advertising
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Software
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FAQ
Do you write proposals from scatch?
No. This service is focused on reviewing and improving existing proposals. You’ll get the best results if you already have a draft to refine.
What do I need to provide?
A draft proposal, pitch, or document. This can be in any format (Word, PDF, slides or text).
Which package should I choose?
Most clients choose the Proposal Upgrade package for the best balance of depth and value. If you’re unsure, start with the Diagnostic.
How quickly will I receive my work?
Delivery times are shown per package. Work is delivered within that timeframe once your materials are received.
What if my proposal is very early or incomplete?
That’s fine. I can still provide structured feedback and guidance on how to improve it. However, more developed drafts will get more detailed and actionable upgrades.
What length and format should my proposal be?
A draft of at least 1–2 pages is recommended to get meaningful feedback. Please provide your proposal in Word, PDF, PowerPoint or plain text format. Please ensure your document is complete and accessible at submission.

