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I will review your ad copy and tell you why it is not converting
About this Gig
Is your ad spend not converting the way it should?
The problem usually isn't your targeting. It isn't your budget. It's your copy.
Most ad copy describes. It lists features, states prices and hopes for the best. Direct response copy does one thing it makes people act.
I'll take your ad, headline or landing page and tell you exactly what's wrong with it. No fluff. No generic advice. A clear, specific breakdown from someone who has spent 20 years in sales understanding what makes people say yes.
What you get:
- Line by line breakdown of what isn't working
- Specific reasons why it isn't converting
- Clear direction on what to fix
Upgrade to the Audit & Rewrite and I'll fix it for you.
Upgrade to the Full Conversion Overhaul and I'll audit and rewrite your entire campaign.
If your copy isn't converting, there's a reason. Let's find it.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do I need to be running ads already to use this service?
For the audit you need existing copy to review. For the rewrite I can work from scratch or improve what you have.
What do I need to provide?
Just paste your existing copy and tell me the platform, goal and target audience. The order questions cover everything I need.
How is this different from other copy reviews on Fiverr?
Most reviewers are writers. I'm a career sales professional who has spent 20 years understanding what makes people say yes. The feedback comes from commercial experience not just copywriting theory.
Can you write copy for any industry?
Yes, though I have specific experience in property, automotive, fitness and financial services.
What if I'm not happy with the audit or rewrite?
I offer revisions on the Standard and Premium tiers. If something isn't right just let me know and I'll fix it.

