I will audit your webinar script and rewrite your weakest section
About this Gig
Most people think their webinar breaks at the end, right when they ask for the sale.
Usually it breaks earlier.
Send me the script you already have. I read every word myself, then you get back a written report that walks through it section by section and shows you where people start drifting, and why.
On Standard and Premium, your weakest section comes back rewritten.
It is kind of like having somebody ride along in your car and finally point out the rattle you stopped hearing months ago.
Before any of this, I spent 25 years selling on a sales floor. That is where you learn to see the exact moment somebody checks out. Writing webinar scripts since 2017.
Not sure it is a fit? Message me first, and we will talk it through.
The Three Extras:
Outline
Sometimes the words are fine, and the running order is wrong. This is your whole webinar rebuilt in the right sequence, start to finish.
FAQ Development
The reasons people hesitate right before they buy, written out with answers that hold. Use them live, or build them into your close.
Additional Revision
One more pass on anything written for you.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
My close is not working. Can you fix that?
Maybe. But the close usually takes the blame for something that went wrong twenty minutes earlier. By the time you ask for the sale, the people who were leaving already left in their heads. So I go looking for that spot first, and it is almost never where you expect.
Would it be faster to just have you write a new one?
I can, and you can message me for a quote. But most scripts I read are about eighty percent fine. Tossing the whole thing usually means paying to rewrite the parts that were already working. Finding the broken piece costs less, and you learn something you keep for the next one.
My script is not finished. Should I wait?
Send it anyway. Half a script tells me plenty, and it costs far less to fix the shape now than after you have written the rest. Some of the best jobs I get are half done.
I am not a writer. Will I be able to use what you send back?
Yes. It comes back in plain words, section by section, with the reason sitting underneath each note. Nothing to decode. And on Standard and Premium, your weakest section comes back already rewritten, so you can drop it straight in.
I already paid somebody to write this and it did not work.
That happens a lot, and it usually is not the writer's fault. Most scripts get written before anyone knows how the audience really reacts. You have run yours now, so you have real information. That makes this pass far more useful than the first one was.
My market is unusual. Do you know my industry?
Probably not, and it matters less than you would think. People check out for the same few reasons no matter what is being sold. I sold phones, pet food, toys, and electronics to people standing right in front of me, and the moment somebody stops listening looks the same every time.
Mine is a bit different. Or it's recorded, or High Ticket, or an odd setup. Does that still work?
Yes. The shape shifts a little. A recorded webinar matters more if anything, because you cannot read the room live, so whatever loses people loses them the same way each time. A $5,000 offer also needs more belief built early. Tell me your price & format when you order & I will read it against that.
Is this proofreading?
No. I am not checking your spelling or your commas. I am looking for the place where your audience stops paying attention, which is usually nowhere near a typo.
What counts as a revision?
Changes to what I wrote. Tightening a section, switching an example, adjusting the tone. If your offer or your price changes after I deliver, that is a new job, not a revision.
Do you look at my emails too?
On Premium, yes. Both the ones before the webinar that get people to show up, and the ones after. The ones before are usually where the bigger problem is hiding.

