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I will beta read your lgbtq sapphic romance manuscript to give actionable feedback
Thriller, Mystery, and Romance Story Development
Hi my name is Donna moore, I am a fiction writer and editorial reader with experience supporting authors through beta reading, proofreading, editing, and formatting. I focus on storytelling, structure...
About this Gig
Your sapphic or LGBTQ romance needs a reader that knows.
I'm a dedicated reader of romance stories, focusing on LGBTQ romance and sapphic romance. I've read hundreds of queer love stories, and I know what makes readers land and what makes readers close the book early.
You will receive a full pacing and tension breakdown, chemistry and emotional impact notes, character depth and character dialogue feedback, and scene-by-scene in-line comments all in a Google Doc when you send me your manuscript.
I read it with the perspective of a true queer romance fan, not a checklist! You will be able to see where your story sings and where it loses the reader.
I can provide a full manuscript critique, chapter critiques, or specific comments on an individual chapter. I will provide you with clear, direct comments that you can use to revise your manuscript.
I read your manuscript the way your most invested reader would and tell you everything your most invested reader would not say to your face.
Looking to make your story impactful?
Message me before you order and let's make sure we're the right fit.
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
I’ve worked hard on my manuscript. Will your feedback be harsh?
Not at all. I know how personal writing can be. My feedback is honest, respectful, and supportive, designed to help you grow your story without discouraging you.
I’m nervous about sharing my manuscript. Will you be kind and respectful?
Absolutely. I know how personal writing can feel. My feedback is honest, supportive, and respectful of your voice while helping you improve your book.
How will your beta reading help my story?
I read as a real reader and point out where the story shines, where readers may lose interest, and what can be improved so your book feels stronger and more engaging.
Can you review unfinished drafts?
Yes. I can beta read early drafts, completed manuscripts, or works in progress and provide useful feedback for your next revision.
Will you understand my LGBTQ+ or sapphic romance story?
Yes. I read with care and respect for representation, emotional connection, character depth, and authentic romance dynamics.
I’m a first-time author. Can I still order?
Of course. Many first-time authors need a trusted beta reader most. I’m happy to support you through the process.
Why should I choose you as my beta reader?
Because I care about every manuscript I read. My goal is to help you feel supported, informed, and excited about taking your story to the next level.
What should I do next?
Send me a message anytime. I’d love to hear about your story and help you decide the best package for your manuscript.
