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I will beta read your fantasy, horror and more manuscript
Level up your story!
Hello there, I'm Thallia! I'm a full time beta reader specializing in LitRPG, Fantasy and Horror. When I'm not working I'm reading anything I can get my hands on or playing role playing games.
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
How I work:
-I work with Adobe or Google Docs, I also use absolutely no AI while working.
-I start by reading through your manuscript, leaving first impression comments in your document while I'm reading.
-I take notes while I'm reading on things I want to include in your report.
-After I'm done with your manuscript, I go back into your reader's report and write it all up. I use my notes and I'll read back through my comments and some of your book to make sure I'm including everything.
-I hand it back to you!
Why Choose Me?:
-I take this very seriously, it's my full time job. I wake up in the morning, grab my coffee, and sit down at my desk to work for the day. Your book won't be an afterthought, it will be my focus until it's done.
-I've been told my inline comments sound like you're sitting with a friend to talk about your book.
-I've been told my inline comments are delightful and hilarious.
-I'm completely honest, I promise. If something isn't working for me, you'll know.
-I'm thorough. I never skim or overlook a single word.
Please feel free to let me know if you have any other questions!
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you specialize in for beta reading?
I specialize in horror, thriller, gothic, paranormal, and splatterpunk genres. I’m a lifelong horror fan, so I’m familiar with a wide range of horror subgenres and love helping authors craft chilling stories.
Do you provide feedback on both short stories and full-length novels?
Yes! Whether you have a short story or a full-length novel, I can provide feedback tailored to your manuscript’s length and needs.
How detailed will my feedback be?
My feedback includes a comprehensive reader’s report covering first impressions, character analysis, dialogue, pacing, and plausibility. I also provide in-line comments with specific suggestions for improvement.
Can I request a specific focus in my feedback?
Absolutely! If you need more focus on certain areas, like character development, pacing, or plot structure, just let me know, and I’ll tailor my feedback to those needs.
Do you offer revisions on the feedback?
I provide clear, actionable feedback with the goal of helping you improve your manuscript. If you have any questions or need clarification on any of the feedback, feel free to ask, and I’ll be happy to assist!
What formats do you accept?
I can work with Google docs, PDF and .docx.
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T trentonnezzy
United States
Ongoing collaborationAlways great and wonderful! Will be returning!
$50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A amellor2
United States
Ongoing collaborationThank you for reviewing The Emerald Ronin. Appreciate you following all of our additional instructions!
$200-$400
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6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M 
matrixdream
Canada
Working with Thalia was fantastic! I received some great feedback, I felt really engaged with, and working together was such a delight! I will definitely be ordering again next time I have a project that needs a fresh pair of eyes! 10/10 would recommend 💖
$50
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?G genogza
United States
Thallia was a pleasure to work with, and she takes the patience and time needed to help with your story. She will let you know what works and doesn't from several perspectives which is a nice touch. I certainly highly recommend her! -Dave R (Writer)
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C coffee_spoons
United States
This was a very thorough review of my manuscript. I really appreciate Thalia's keen insight and attention to detail. She noted some areas for improvement that I think are quite valid. I also appreciated what resonated with her.
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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T trentonnezzy
United States
Ongoing collaborationAlways great and wonderful! Will be returning!
$50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?A amellor2
United States
Ongoing collaborationThank you for reviewing The Emerald Ronin. Appreciate you following all of our additional instructions!
$200-$400
Price
6 weeks
Duration
Helpful?M matrixdream
Canada
Working with Thalia was fantastic! I received some great feedback, I felt really engaged with, and working together was such a delight! I will definitely be ordering again next time I have a project that needs a fresh pair of eyes! 10/10 would recommend 💖
$50
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?G genogza
United States
Thallia was a pleasure to work with, and she takes the patience and time needed to help with your story. She will let you know what works and doesn't from several perspectives which is a nice touch. I certainly highly recommend her! -Dave R (Writer)
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C coffee_spoons
United States
This was a very thorough review of my manuscript. I really appreciate Thalia's keen insight and attention to detail. She noted some areas for improvement that I think are quite valid. I also appreciated what resonated with her.
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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