I will be your brutally honest beta reader
Full time Fiverr, Beta Reader, Proofreader, Translator
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
Ready for brutally honest feedback that drives real improvement?
If you're serious about making your story the best, you need feedback beyond praise and politeness. That's where I come in. I provide direct, actionable critique that highlights what's working and what isn't so you can make meaningful changes and take your story to the next level. My feedback is brutally honest, and designed to challenge you and help you grow as a writer.
What I offer as your beta reader:
- In-line comments throughout your manuscript, showing what I like, where I see potential issues and suggestions for improvement. You'll get real-time insights into your characters, plot, pacing, and worldbuilding.
- A concise 1-3 page report summarizing the strengths and weaknesses of your work, from the opening hook to character arcs and thematic development. Expect practical advice and thought-provoking questions that will guide your revisions.
- Actionable feedback with clear, specific steps you can take right away to improve your manuscript.
Genres I read:
I accept any genre fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thriller, historical fiction, adventure, and more whether you're writing in English or Spanish!
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Fantasy
Language:
English
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Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you Beta Read for any other language?
Yes, I read and also write in Spanish.
Do you only read certain genres?
No, I'll read anything and give honest feedback!
What if my document exceeds the biggest package?
That's okay. Just message me and I can give you a custom order: +$1 USD/1k words
What if my document is around 5k words?
That's okay! You can send me a text and I will provide a cheaper package for you!
Do you read non-fiction?
I do! Please, feel free to message me if you have any questions.
Can you beta read just one chapter?
Yes, I have another gig for it! https://www.fiverr.com/share/Y4VKoz
33 reviews for this Gig
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gio60antonio

Mexico
2 Words perfect and honest very honest
$50-$100
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8 days
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gwnichols975

United States
There is nothing more to say other than, Thank you Gil. You helped in areas you probably didn't expect to and always appreciate helpful feed back.
$50-$100
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7 days
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scottholmes361

United States
This is the second manuscript he's reviewed for me. He has exceeded expectations both times. couldn't recommend him more
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C caryser

United States
Gil provides the type of feedback necessary for a writer to grow. I know, because I've benefitted from Gil's professional opinion on two projects, and would not hesitate going again to him for help. His mind can see the larger project goals and supporting details that make a novel greatly improved. Gil's input is clear and has strong value.
$200-$400
Price
11 days
Duration
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Helpful?R renie_d

United States
If you're looking for someone to tell you how it is, Gil is your guy. He offered constructive criticism and gave suggestions on how to improve. I appreciate his no nonsense approach to his beta reading services and feel that his suggestions will help make my manuscript better.
$200-$400
Price
6 weeks
Duration
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33 reviews for this Gig
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gio60antonio

Mexico
2 Words perfect and honest very honest
$50-$100
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8 days
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Seller's Response
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gwnichols975

United States
There is nothing more to say other than, Thank you Gil. You helped in areas you probably didn't expect to and always appreciate helpful feed back.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?S 
scottholmes361

United States
This is the second manuscript he's reviewed for me. He has exceeded expectations both times. couldn't recommend him more
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C caryser

United States
Gil provides the type of feedback necessary for a writer to grow. I know, because I've benefitted from Gil's professional opinion on two projects, and would not hesitate going again to him for help. His mind can see the larger project goals and supporting details that make a novel greatly improved. Gil's input is clear and has strong value.
$200-$400
Price
11 days
Duration
D 
Seller's Response
Helpful?R renie_d

United States
If you're looking for someone to tell you how it is, Gil is your guy. He offered constructive criticism and gave suggestions on how to improve. I appreciate his no nonsense approach to his beta reading services and feel that his suggestions will help make my manuscript better.
$200-$400
Price
6 weeks
Duration
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