I will be your brutally honest beta reader

4.8
4.8

Mexico

I speak English, Spanish

77 orders completed

Full time Fiverr, Beta Reader, Proofreader, Translator

Hi! I'm Gil, and I'm a writer. I'm well versed in beta reading, proofreading, translations, and content writing. Let's get started! Send me a message and I will respond ASAP. I work full-time on...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

About this Gig

Ready for brutally honest feedback that drives real improvement?

If you're serious about making your story the best, you need feedback beyond praise and politeness. That's where I come in. I provide direct, actionable critique that highlights what's working and what isn't so you can make meaningful changes and take your story to the next level. My feedback is brutally honest, and designed to challenge you and help you grow as a writer.


What I offer as your beta reader:

  • In-line comments throughout your manuscript, showing what I like, where I see potential issues and suggestions for improvement. You'll get real-time insights into your characters, plot, pacing, and worldbuilding.
  • A concise 1-3 page report summarizing the strengths and weaknesses of your work, from the opening hook to character arcs and thematic development. Expect practical advice and thought-provoking questions that will guide your revisions.
  • Actionable feedback with clear, specific steps you can take right away to improve your manuscript.


Genres I read:

I accept any genre fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thriller, historical fiction, adventure, and more whether you're writing in English or Spanish!

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Fantasy

Language:

English

Spanish

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

33 reviews for this Gig
4.8

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.8
  • Quality of delivery
    4.7
  • Value of delivery
    4.8
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    gio60antonio

    MX

    Mexico

    5

    2 Words perfect and honest very honest

    $50-$100

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    gwnichols975

    US

    United States

    4.3

    There is nothing more to say other than, Thank you Gil. You helped in areas you probably didn't expect to and always appreciate helpful feed back.

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    scottholmes361

    US

    United States

    5

    This is the second manuscript he's reviewed for me. He has exceeded expectations both times. couldn't recommend him more

    $200-$400

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    caryser

    US

    United States

    5

    Gil provides the type of feedback necessary for a writer to grow. I know, because I've benefitted from Gil's professional opinion on two projects, and would not hesitate going again to him for help. His mind can see the larger project goals and supporting details that make a novel greatly improved. Gil's input is clear and has strong value.

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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    renie_d

    US

    United States

    5

    If you're looking for someone to tell you how it is, Gil is your guy. He offered constructive criticism and gave suggestions on how to improve. I appreciate his no nonsense approach to his beta reading services and feel that his suggestions will help make my manuscript better.

    $200-$400

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

33 reviews for this Gig
4.8

(29)
(3)
(0)
(0)
(1)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.8
  • Quality of delivery
    4.7
  • Value of delivery
    4.8
Sort By
Most relevant
  • G
    image-docs

    gio60antonio

    MX

    Mexico

    5

    2 Words perfect and honest very honest

    $50-$100

    Price

    8 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • G
    image-docs

    gwnichols975

    US

    United States

    4.3

    There is nothing more to say other than, Thank you Gil. You helped in areas you probably didn't expect to and always appreciate helpful feed back.

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    scottholmes361

    US

    United States

    5

    This is the second manuscript he's reviewed for me. He has exceeded expectations both times. couldn't recommend him more

    $200-$400

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C

    caryser

    US

    United States

    5

    Gil provides the type of feedback necessary for a writer to grow. I know, because I've benefitted from Gil's professional opinion on two projects, and would not hesitate going again to him for help. His mind can see the larger project goals and supporting details that make a novel greatly improved. Gil's input is clear and has strong value.

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R
    image-docs

    renie_d

    US

    United States

    5

    If you're looking for someone to tell you how it is, Gil is your guy. He offered constructive criticism and gave suggestions on how to improve. I appreciate his no nonsense approach to his beta reading services and feel that his suggestions will help make my manuscript better.

    $200-$400

    Price

    6 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No