I will give your first chapter a professional developmental edit

Want honest feedback that actually helps your story get better?

If you want your story to be great, you need more than nice comments. You need real feedback. I read your work and tell you what's working and what's not. My feedback is honest and direct it might be hard to hear, but it will help you grow as a writer.

Quick note: You'll get comments and a written report not a rewrite. I won't fix your grammar or change your sentences. I show you where the problems are and why, so you can fix them yourself.

What you get:

• Comments inside your story notes on what I liked, what confused me, and ways to improve your characters, plot, pacing, and world.
• A short report (1-3 pages) on your story's big strengths and weaknesses, plus clear questions to guide your revisions.
• Clear next steps not just "this is weak," but exactly what to fix.

Works for: your first chapter or a full short story.

Genres: fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thriller, historical fiction, adventure, and more. English and Spanish welcome!