I will beta read your first chapter or short story

Ready for brutally honest feedback that drives real improvement?

If you're serious about making your story the best, you need feedback beyond praise and politeness. That's where I come in. I provide direct, actionable critique that highlights what's working and what isn't so you can make meaningful changes and take your story to the next level. My feedback is brutally honest, and designed to challenge you and help you grow as a writer.

What I offer as your beta reader:

• In-line comments throughout your manuscript, showing what I like, where I see potential issues and suggestions for improvement. You'll get real-time insights into your characters, plot, pacing, and worldbuilding.
• A concise 1-3 page report summarizing the strengths and weaknesses of your work, from the opening hook to character arcs and thematic development. Expect practical advice and thought-provoking questions that will guide your revisions.
• Actionable feedback with clear, specific steps you can take right away to improve your manuscript.

Genres I read:

I accept any genre fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thriller, historical fiction, adventure, and more whether you're writing in English or Spanish!