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I will provide developmental editing to fix structure and pacing
Turning Stories Into Page Turner's: Plot, Character and Worldbuilding Help
Let's be honest: your first draft is a mess. That's normal. Now let's fix it.
I'm a developmental editor and story coach who helps fiction writers turn chaotic manuscripts into coherent, compelling ...
About this Gig
Plot holes? Flat characters? Pacing issues? Let's fix your story. I provide developmental editing for fiction novels (fantasy, sci-fi, thriller) and help you strengthen your plot, characters, and worldbuilding.
What you get:
- Detailed manuscript analysis (37-page report)
- Plot structure & pacing review
- Character development feedback (arcs, motivation, consistency)
- Worldbuilding review (for fantasy/sci-fi)
- Scene-level notes & actionable revision roadmap
Not included: line editing, proofreading, rewrites, or publication guarantees.
About me: Creator of Writesparky, helping 100+ writers improve manuscripts through story coaching and editing.
Before ordering: Message me with genre, word count, and story struggles, I'll confirm fit. Turnaround: 7-10 days.
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