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I will coach your story to fix plot holes and develop characters
Turning Stories Into Page Turner's: Plot, Character and Worldbuilding Help
Let's be honest: your first draft is a mess. That's normal. Now let's fix it.
I'm a developmental editor and story coach who helps fiction writers turn chaotic manuscripts into coherent, compelling ...
About this Gig
If your story feels broken and you can't see it anymore, this session is for you.
No vague advice. No generic feedback. We'll find the real problem and fix it.
This is perfect if you're dealing with:
- Being stuck in the middle of a draft
- Plot holes you can't untangle
- Flat or inconsistent characters
- Worldbuilding that doesn't quite work
- Pacing issues killing momentum
WHAT WE'LL DO
In a 1:1 coaching session, we will:
- Identify what's actually holding your story back
- Brainstorm clear, workable solutions
- Build an actionable plan you can use immediately
- Answer your specific writing questions
You'll leave with clarity, direction, and next steps.
HOW IT WORKS
- Send a short summary of your story + the problem
- We schedule a video call (Zoom or Google Meet)
- We work through the issue together, live
- You leave unstuck and ready to write
ABOUT ME
I'm the creator of Writesparky, a YouTube channel focused on storytelling and worldbuilding.
I've coached 50+ writers through story problems like yours.
Style: Direct, honest, and solution-focused. I won't waste your time.
READY TO BOOK?
Message me with your story summary and main issue.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you provide line editing or proofreading?
No, I focus on developmental editing (big-picture story structure). For line editing, you'll need a different editor after we fix the story foundation.
Do you offer refunds?
I stand by my work. If I deliver what's promised and you're unhappy, we can discuss revisions. But if you simply don't like honest feedback, that's not grounds for a refund.
What if I don't like your feedback?
My job is to tell you the truth about what's working and what's not. If you're looking for someone to tell you your manuscript is perfect, I'm not your editor. If you want to make it BETTER, let's talk.
