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I will be development editor for folk horror, sci fi paranormal, ghost fantasy stories
Developmental Book Editor for Fiction, Nonfiction AND Memoir
Book editing for authors whose stories need sharper structure, stronger characters, and cleaner prose. With 7 years as a dedicated developmental editor, I’ve helped 20+ first-time authors turn manuscr...
About this Gig
Your folk horror, sci-fi, paranormal, ghost, or dark fantasy story may have a gripping premise, yet readers can lose interest when tension fades, pacing drags, or supernatural elements lack clear rules.
I'm Eliot Javins, a developmental book editor with 7 years of experience and editorial training. I've successfully completed projects involving folk horror, science fiction, paranormal fiction, ghost stories, dark fantasy, thrillers, novellas, and KDP manuscripts.
I focus on plot structure, pacing, character arcs, atmosphere, suspense, worldbuilding, supernatural logic, POV, dialogue, continuity, and scene purpose. I identify plot holes, repetition, weak motivations, slow sections, confusing reveals, and moments where your story loses momentum. You'll receive developmental notes, in-document comments, and practical revision guidance.
Why choose me? I protect your voice and genre vision instead of forcing your story into a formula. My feedback is direct, specific, and built for meaningful revision.
If your story has the right idea but needs stronger storytelling, send it over. Lets make it darker, sharper, and harder to put down.
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FAQ
What genres do you specialize in?
I specialize in folk horror, supernatural horror, science fiction, paranormal fiction, ghost stories, dark fantasy, gothic fiction, thrillers, speculative fiction, novellas, and related genre fiction.
What does developmental editing cover?
I focus on the elements that shape the reader's experience: plot, structure, pacing, character arcs, suspense, atmosphere, worldbuilding, supernatural logic, scene purpose, POV, dialogue, continuity, and story flow.
Can you edit science fiction?
Yes. I can review worldbuilding, internal logic, technology or speculative concepts, exposition, pacing, character motivation, plot structure, continuity, and reader comprehension while respecting your creative direction.
Can you edit paranormal fiction?
Absolutely. I can evaluate supernatural rules, character motivations, atmosphere, conflict, pacing, reveals, mythology, continuity, and whether the paranormal elements meaningfully support the story.
Can you edit ghost stories?
Yes. I can examine atmosphere, suspense, escalation, reveals, supernatural logic, setting, character reactions, pacing, and payoff so the haunting elements have greater narrative impact.
Can you edit dark fantasy?
Yes. I can review worldbuilding, character arcs, magic or supernatural systems, conflict, pacing, atmosphere, stakes, plot structure, and internal consistency.
Can you edit dark fantasy?
Yes. I can review worldbuilding, character arcs, magic or supernatural systems, conflict, pacing, atmosphere, stakes, plot structure, and internal consistency.
Will you rewrite my story?
No. This is primarily a developmental editing service. I provide professional feedback, in-document comments, and practical revision direction while protecting your voice and creative control.
Does the $15 package cover a complete novel?
No. The $15 Basic package covers up to 5,000 words and is designed as a focused developmental diagnostic. Larger manuscripts should use Standard, Premium, or a custom offer.
Do you provide proofreading?
This gig focuses on developmental editing, not comprehensive proofreading. The priority is improving your story's structure, pacing, characters, suspense, atmosphere, worldbuilding, and reader experience.
