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I will be your developmental beta reader for detailed story critique
Your Manuscript's First Reader: Beta Reading, Developmental Edits
Hello! I'm Elise, the Editor-in-Chief of a literary publication with 3 years of dedicated editorial expertise in the publishing industry. I offer deep structural critique as well as simple proofreadin...
About this Gig
My decade-long passion and editorial experience in the publishing industry allows me to analyze your manuscript like an architect, not merely a proofreader. I bring publishing standards to your draft, providing feedback with actionable revision solutions.
What I Deliver - Full Beta Reading with Structural Critique
My analysis focuses on the high-level narrative elements agents and editors demand. You'll receive two essential deliverables:
- Comprehensive Critique Letter (Reader Report): A professional report summarizing your strengths, outlining structural weaknesses, and offering specific revision strategies for success.
- In-Line Annotations: Comments placed directly into your manuscript highlight exactly where a structural, pacing, or mechanical error occurs.
Focus Areas: Plot/Placing, Character Motivation, Narrative Flow, and Dialogue
A detailed analysis from an experienced editor will move your draft to the next level. Ready to see your story's true potential? Select a package or message me for custom quote tailored to your manuscript and needs!
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FAQ
Which genres do you accept for critique?
I accept all genres! My past projects have focused on literary fiction, fantasy, historical fiction, thrillers, YA, and contemporary fiction for all age levels. Not the best fit for nonfiction.
My manuscript is longer than 100k words, but I still want feedback!
Not a problem! Reach out for a custom quote, charged in increments of 10k words.
What is the difference between beta reading and proofreading?
My service is developmental and structural critique, which goes beyond basic proofreading. Beta reading provides sample reader reactions, while proofreading focuses on catching mechanical errors. I provide detailed feedback on narrative elements such as plot, pacing, and character motivation.
What format do you deliver the feedback in?
I deliver two items. The in-line commentary will be completed directly in your document, using Track Changes for MS Word and Comments for Google Docs. Your separate, comprehensive critique letter will be delivered in a PDF or document format.
Do you accept work with potentially triggering or NSFW themes?
Yes! Please provide any trigger warnings, but I am open to reviewing almost anything. However, I do reserve the right to refuse and refund any manuscript. Sexual content is acceptable but not pure erotica.
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Good JOB!. Now to work with her suggestions and move this story forward to the next higher steps.
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bethmad
United States
Would use this professional again for beta reading, developmental insights, and proofreading. Pleasant to communicate with, she seems to truly care about improving all aspects of the work.
Up to $50
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4 days
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Helpful?B bethmad
United States
Honest feedback, prompt delivery of report, professional insights into developmental issues of MS.
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R rdavidfirst
United States
Good JOB!. Now to work with her suggestions and move this story forward to the next higher steps.
$50-$100
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10 days
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Helpful?B bethmad
United States
Would use this professional again for beta reading, developmental insights, and proofreading. Pleasant to communicate with, she seems to truly care about improving all aspects of the work.
Up to $50
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4 days
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Helpful?B bethmad
United States
Honest feedback, prompt delivery of report, professional insights into developmental issues of MS.
Up to $50
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4 days
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