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I will critique your romance opening chapters and book blurb
Romance developmental editor and author of 14 books
When I'm not writing and editing, I love spending time with my family, camping and riding ATVs. I also have a passion for playing guitar and singing.
About this Gig
Not sure your opening is hooking readers? Start here.
I'm a developmental editor with 14 published books across two names, including 6 romantic suspense novels as Trinity Cole. I'll read your first chapters (up to 5,000 words) and your blurb the way a reader would, then send you a clear 1-2 page critique.
You'll get feedback on:
- Your hook and opening scene
- Early chemistry or conflict
- Voice, pacing, and point of view
- Whether your setup fits your genre and tropes
- Your blurb: does it make readers click "Buy"?
- Comments right on your pages
Romance is my specialty, but I critique all fiction genres. I don't take erotica or reverse harem projects.
Delivered in about 5 days. Honest, kind, and specific. Your $95 counts toward any full edit booked within 30 days.
Please message me first with a short synopsis, word count, subgenre, and deadline so I can confirm we're a good fit.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What do I send?
Your first chapters (up to 5,000 words) as a .docx, plus your blurb.
Do you proofread?
No. This critique focuses on story, hook, pacing, and genre fit, not typos.
Can I upgrade to a full edit?
Yes! Your $95 counts toward any full developmental edit booked within 30 days.
